All Comments on 'Make Me Believe'

Learn how to write, that opening paragraph made me stop reading. Bad writing, just bad...

Well done all around. We just med a second chapter,

Your well written story made my hard cock throb in time to my pounding heart and run freely with sweet clear honey!

The lead paragraph of this story is so bad I just stopped.

Great story, got me hard! Would love to be seduced by a man.

That is a very nice work.! Love it!

I really enjoyed this story! It was well written and it made,me very hot and wanted to be fucked just like that. I'm a mature married male but, I also love to be with another male. I enjoy sucking cock and best of all enjoy been fucked really good and hard.

Great work man, a real sweet little story.

TELL ME, THERE IS MORE TO THIS STORY, CASEY NEEDS TO START DRESSING AS THE SISSY HE IS, FOR HIS NEW LOVE...! BETTY jo xoxo