All Comments on 'Make Me Believe'

... just, wow!

Amazing. Soo HOT!!!!!

Though would've loved to have read the wanton, whorish words spilling from her lips after he put the wood to her, too. :-D Nevertheless, I get the "leave-it-to-the-imagination" ending. ;-)

Your writing is excellent and you draw a scene with such intellectual power... the mind fucking is a strong as the ass-fucking. Scrumptous!

SpanknWill

Theres a typo at the end of it hehe...just thought I'd point that out in case anyone missed it :P

What? Where? I must fix it!!!

Thank you all for the wonderful feedback. So glad you are enjoying! :)