All Comments on 'Maker Girl Ch. 02'

Well done! A nice writing style. Hope to read more.

I like the writing very much

A little strange, but fun. Thanks for sharing.

I don't often write comments about stories, but this one simply demands it. Outstanding character development, and having been in the industry for years, technically believable also - it's not always who you know, but what you know that gets you ahead in a meritocracy such as Silicon Valley. Loved the descriptions of the area, especially Skyline Drive... it's been a long time.

Most particularly, I like the strong women in the story who are totally competent and totally feminine. Brian is soooo lucky!

Great story why didn't you finish it????

Very disappointed that haven't seen fit to finish this fascinating yarn!

I am usually the bandit screaming at unfinished stories ;)

In this case I feel that we all know the continuation of this story. But I would've like another page or two, but don't feel betrayed because there isn't;)