Makin' It Even Pt. 01

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Our parents would be coming home in 3 days, so if anything else was going to happen, it needed to be soon...

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BruceS1949BruceS19495 months ago

Nice read but what happens next?

Anguished_AmyAnguished_Amyabout 2 years ago

Love the story. This is a very believable buildup and seduction between siblings. The way it happens in real life. Believe me… I know.

Looking forward to reading part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You need an anatomy lesson. A woman would be a complete idiot to try and shave her vagina! There is no hair in a vagina!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great premise.

But all that touching and not a bit of overt excitement? C'mon...

Three stars.

LegallySaneLegallySaneabout 3 years ago

Readers beware. This author is a cock tease.

Maude1067Maude1067over 3 years ago

Great story - you built it up very well.

SeraphimCmdrSeraphimCmdralmost 4 years ago
Seriously, more!

I've already read part 2. How long before 3 and 4?? Really well done. Take your time but hurry up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Lotion is a no no

As any woman will tell you, suntan lotion drenched fingers have no place near her vagina. OUCH! But other than rather painful thought that it was a good teaser

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
More please... More

Just simply superb...

Trekkie469Trekkie469over 5 years ago
Hard for sibling

I can't wait to read part 2. But I think I'll rub one out now and come back for seconds.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Down, down

"descended down" - these two words mean the same thing. It's exactly the same as writing, "She went down down the stairs." Were you going for a Status Quo kind of thing? "Down, down, deeper and down..."

prop69prop69over 5 years ago
Loving the story

I hope he gets his cock in her nice big sweet ass.

Hope they decide to share an apartment.

With she was my tan sister

prop69prop69over 5 years ago
An erotic story PLEASE

PLEASE TAKE IT TO THE NEXT STEP

WE NEED FINGERS IN HER PUSSY OR MY COCK WILL EXPLODE.

Why can't they talk to each other.

Excellent story ki

lalahrilalahriover 5 years ago
Nice build up

For part 2 it would be nice to have them go to a public beach

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Do writers get a kick out of writing half Stories

So many do this

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