All Comments on 'Making Changes Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Amazingly well written and riveting story. I love every bit of it. Thanks and please keep it going

mfa607mfa607about 5 years ago

So hot!! Thank you! Oh! More please?

OpenthedooragainOpenthedooragainabout 5 years ago

Great story.....good ending if that is it as you now know they want to be with each other......

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not even mentioned

After so much unreal choices and hurt, how were the events at Charlie’s party not even discussed as Alex and Ryan reconcile? There is absolutely no way that Ryan witnessing Alex fucking Robbie and Alex knowing that Ryan 3-way fucked Charlie and Zack could be overcome and forgiven without even a conversation!? If we are to accept this happened outside the written story, we are robbed of critical explanations of each character’s motivations toward each other. Maybe I’m too much a fan of monogamy but this would be nearly impossible to brush by. Can you please provide some insight on this? Just too many bad choices that have gone unresolved.

dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

Holy smoke this is ten stars hot. So beautifully written.

DickbrokemyheartDickbrokemyheartover 1 year ago

This story is so freak`in good! thanks : )

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