All Comments on 'Making Her Pay Pt. 02'

Pt 02 is boring I hope Pt. 03 is better. ZZZZZ

"I started my quest to keep my wife that night. . . I told her that one of my fantasies was to come home and catch her in bed with a lover."

So your wife shows signs of cheating and wanting to have sex with other men, and your dumb ass idea is to tell her you want to see other men fuck her?

You know its one thing for a husband to refuse to communicate because he is so convinced she already cheated that he is paying money for proof

Its entirely different to keep your moth shut for months, while actively lying about the fact that you want her to fuck around on you

You wanna write a cuck story write one, dont write a story about how the man wont share only to have a twist "I guess I was a cuck all along" ending

Twist endings werent even all that good on the Twilight Zone, let alone the cuck zone

I'm afraid that in his place, I'd now be paranoid about eating or drinking ANYTHING around Mark and Suzie. Especially now that he suspects that Mark might want to fuck his ass in a dominant manner, leaning towards non-consent.

It seems he is just cautiously preparing for cuckold-mold. I read enough of these cheating wives stories to know that this guy could have stopped this. He deserves what he gets and I usually prefer both. Lol

I just don't understand why authors post stories in parts, if the story s finished post it all

If its not finished, then finish it and post it all, this posting in 2pages etc just takes away any enjoyment

wish your chapters were a bit longer

where the plot will be advanced at all?

Will chapter three be more meaningless meanderings?

Interesting, but still not a lot to go on. But we do know that Marie is cheating. Need to fix it soon and with prejudice.

Why all the pussyfooting around? Stick a PI on her and bug her phone to catch her in the act. It's painfully obvious she's been cheating on him!

...but still lie to each other. Dumb wife, Dumber husband.

With all he has learned why not follow her? If he is right they are meeting someplace. Worth a day off to check and confront her.

2*

Marie’s sexual horizons were expanding, and she was drooping not just clues but hints; that should not have taken 6,000 words, and it felt like you were over stretching it to make length.

It’s obvious that the light at the end of the tunnel is an oncoming freight 🚂 train, but you’ve made the tunnel overlong. Wile E Coyote did not take this long to get hit by it.

How stupid does he have to be? Just spit it out already. She is already Mark and Suzie's fuck toy.

KB

the wife in the story. Two chapters and nothing happened. This is like a Seinfeld episode, a story about nothing.

AMerryman 2.0

Is the total destruction of this farce of a marriage on a bobsled run.

Posting two pages at a time feels like you’re just intentionally dragging this out. I’ll be back in a month if I remember. Maybe it’ll be done by then.

Needs longer chapters moving things along.

It’s good but taking a little long to get where it’s going . I’d be much more forceful in my opinions and even though he is saying he doesn’t like certain things I’d definitely explain that the marriage would be instantly over . No questions asked and no second chances. This way it’s clear where you stand

“You are just the cutest little prick, aren’t you?" - Was that a Freudian slip? "Little," as opposed to her lover's large? Heh, he picked up on that, too!

"Sputum?" I know it's technically correct, but don't most people just say saliva?

She's not in favor of effeminate men, UNLESS one is submitting to an Alpha? It feels like she's contradicting herself a bit.

Re the question that he thought wasn't on the survey, he should probably check later!

"Will share part three as soon as I can get it posted" - As soon as you can get it posted? Does that mean that it's written and edited? Then why not include it here?

I realize it would kill what you're trying to do her, but why not just confront her? "I know what you're trying to do here. You want to do some kind of swap with Mark and Suzie. Let me make it clear if I somehow haven't already done so. It AIN'T gonna happen."

Another 2 page chapter and frankly I've forgotten what the first chapter was about. I started to read this chapter but it's so dull I'm no longer interested, certainly not interested enough to go back and review the first chapter again.

So we now know she is doing a trifecta with Suzie and Mark. Yet he is still fuck his now slut wife. And doing nothing to find them in a compromising position. As you drag this story along. In the real world just divorce her ass. Prepare your finances. If you expose them both will lose there jobs. .so unless you run play it smart.

When are two pages considered a chapter?

This chapter did nothing to advance your story. It was just filler, and uninteresting.

OTOH, the conversations in bed and the survey set the stage somewhat; however, there's clearly enough already to suspect she's cheated (deepthroating him, the chair, etc.) But I've never understood stories where hubby waits for even worse stuff to occur. Whatever has happened thus far may be recoverable, but the longer it goes, the deeper it goes, salvaging the marriage gets tougher. He says he has decided to try to keep his wife, so why hasn't he checked up on a work night? And the choice of title makes it seem clear where this headed, while hubby does little to thwart it.

I like the story a lot, but you are waiting to long for him to see the light and hire the private investigator. Still looking forward to next chapter

Wtf no guy is this bloody stupid. Normal idiots would have hired a pi like month ago

Sirens and red lights are going off and he is “a little concerned “? Maybe I’ve just read too many stories but it’s time for serious action. His wife has probably already cheated big. But if not it’s imminent.

It’s irritating that the guy is taking it so slow.

Your good for weeks at a time ? How long does it take to start divorce .I think your the wimp and been eating Marks creampies! She has been cheating and this is to slow there is no drama left in this story. What does cooking got to do with this. Thanks for the read.

I felt that he seems to be a bit of a anal retentive, mulling over things to excess.

but this is like watching paint dry. the buildup is a very slow burn, and my fast twitch brain cells are wanting an explosion sooner than the story is giving it.

What is this dude's issue? He is rug sweeping the fact that the wife is lying to him re wanting other women, wanting him with other men, and seeing the "love chair" in the other couples bedroom. What more does he need to do to take some decisive action?

I'm pulling for the marriage, hopefully his wife "gets it", and does not fall. Fantasies should remain in that realm, and not a precursor to cheating. Don't take so long releasing the next chapter.

Making her pay...

So do Mark and Suzie have another party, in which they slip hubby a date rape drug and Mark fucks him in the ass??? Does hubby want to get revenge? Who is her? SUZIE OR his wife?

He suspects his wife is fucking Mark and Suzie. That Mark is a dom. That mark wants to fuck him in the ass and his wife was ts to watch....

Why does he not just call it out? Why does he want to try to keep her? Why does his plan to keep her involve letting her think he wants her to fuck others?

Is it so she lets her guard down, thinking hubby is ok with it, so he can catch/ film her cheating? So he can walk in on her doing it and throw a fit?

KB

I am enjoying the story but it's just taking too long to have him find out what is going on and take decisive action.

It's hinting that she has already been unfaithful and if that is the case he needs to arrange to crush her lover and turn her out.

Please conclude the story soon.

Sbrooks, as for technicalities :

saliva is the watery solution excreted by the salivary glands, most are under the tongue. Sputum is the debris swept up from the lungs by the cilia lining our airways. It has a dense consistency.

i hope he gets the slut he married in a tight spot after he takes her ass time to put the shit to her and her friends maybe a good slapping around of mark will help his attitude

i like the way the plot enhances the anticipation of what is really going on with the wife. One little bit of evidence at a time. Looking forward to the next. 4 stars.

The plot so far is holding my attention, but other than a not-so-subtle hint, nothing really happened. I’ll assume that this is a dud chapter in a good story and will keep reading.

3 stars...

Way too slow paced. His behavior is ridiculously passive given his perceptions. You’ve pretty much already given away what’s going to happen, so get to the finish line.

Only 2 pages yet it still feels long and drawn out.

So, she's hocks a loogie to lube his cock? Yuck!

While it seems likely, what with her improved oral skills, just her obvious interest in sex with Mark and Suzie needs to be nipped in the bud.

For what reason in anyones mind would you suddenly suggest you have a fantasy about seeing her with another man? He has already said he would go ape if anyone tried it on with her. Already told her that he is not interested in swinging.

I cannot consider any possible scenario where this would have been a sane thought.

Sorry but if this is his line of thinking he may as well abandon his quest now. I for one am losing interest as very little seems to happen in the story.

its slow and steady , hes working it out, has she or hasn't she ? , will she or wont she, ? ,,,, I don't think she has but if hes not carefull it wont be long before she does, I can see a few harsh words coming soon, thanks for sharing, looking forward to part 3

But where the spouse is cheating already....stringing along a naive partner...no.

The manipulation she's engaged in. The comments about his prick being 'little'. The gay fantasies. A dominant male taking her against her her will anally. The fact that she's acting so ugly in her attempts at manipulating her man says a lot about her already. Her husband is no longer her trusted confidant. Just a rube/pawn for her selfish whims to move about...like a thing.

Seems only reasonable to say this is a dead marriage on life support. We're just waiting for the husband to pull the plug. A lust filled fuck up is one thing. Maybe booze. Maybe being drugged. Maybe even one moment of emotional weakness. But the continued lying, cheating, manipulating....well....think about it....how can those be healthy values?

I will add this though. I usually really enjoy this author. But the last few stories have, in some weird effort to seem nuanced, seem implausible. If this story is a RAAC, but with no actual logical reason for it, I'm out. Some people may enjoy irrational love stories where abuse is rewarded with forgiveness...but not me. I find it deeply unsettling.

Bring it!

I think this is where Troy has a "we need to talk" talk with Marie. He could tell her to sit and keep quiet until he is finished and at the end of this talk for her to take the rest of the night and the next day to consider her response and until this time tomorrow, then he would then listen to her response but not before.

He could then list his suspicions and tell her she has a choice to make. Either continue on this course and get a divorce, try to justify it as not meaning anything that will also lead to a divorce or use a one time only get out off jail free card and never bring this up again, quit her job, join him in another town at his new job so there will never be a chance that someone that knows of this little side trip outside of there married life together, can ever rub his nose in this shit. (What will it be?)

Sorry, I usually like your stories but this is becoming boring. Really, there's no edge to it. The wife's such a weak character and the husband almost a non-entity. Hard to care whether she does or doesn't, or did or didn't.

He knows when his wife is lying....married long enough. Its obvious to me that she's already done the "deed" with Mark and with Suzie.

This episode about the sex questionnaire is even further proof, her blushes tell a completely different story to her voice. And she wants a strong hunk to take her anal virginity....an act she specifically forbade for so many years and is now excited about it.... yes, she blushed! With all her changes in the last few months, e.g. coming home late, attending teachers days, etc., she's probably done it all, including anal. The way she's questioning him, it is clear she is very interested in swapping and to some extent lezzy stuff with Suzie and watching gay action. Where did all this come from?? Obviously from that her new found friends. And now she's trying to get him interested in all this stuff to hide the fact that she's already strayed.

Having aroused her with the ass play hubby should have taken her supposed anal cherry. At least he would have satisfied himself after all these years before dumping her cheating ass.

Hubby should have been checking her when she first started behaving differently. Long time married people notice minute changes in their partners. She must have figured out that he suspected something and makes an effort to come home on time, etc. while working on him to become "adventurous". Still, I'm sure she's smart enough to continue her liaisons with Mark. With hubby not on the offensive, she's still feels secure in the knowledge that he doesn't know.

Time to launch operation "payback".

Good pace of information and discoveries.

Keeping us guessing at just how far wife has gone down the rabbit hole.

Like McDonald's,

'Bah...bah...bah...bah...bah! I'm loving it! '

5 of these 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

too much b/s.

Is this written by a teen or young 20's virgin?

The wording is all there, but it's all wrong. Sputum? Spit or saliva ffs, it's a porn site not a biology lesson. Nether cheeks? her bum I guess. She doesn't like having her bum stroked by her husband of 20+ years? I get she doesn't want arse play, but stroking her cheeks is a LONG way from that.

He makes 43 sound ancient, look to thy father and ask him. 43 is not old in any way shape or form and only a small group of men need viagra at that age. Read the ads... men over 50...

Now for the dipshit, he keeps filing stuff away? Was he not alerted in the 1st chapter, why has he done nothing about that? Why not confront her? Fucks up your story if you're going for cuck shit and if that's the case will end with 1s across the board...I'm clever I learnt after being caught out to verify with series unless I know the author.

If it is cuck gets dominated by so called dominant bully boy then advertise it or put it in fetish.

Why has dipshit not just said to her flat, any outside interference would end the marriage and possibly the interlopers chances of further sex. With each stamp on the nuts - I (stamp) know (stamp) I (stamp) am (stamp) going (stamp) down (stamp) for (stamp) a (stamp) long (stamp) time (stamp) but (stamp) you (stamp) will (stamp) never (stamp) fuck (stamp) again (stamp and grind).

Oh that's right no RAAC but no BTB even though she will pay... hmm pay Mark to fuck her husband?

Why didn't he just bend her over the sofa and take her arse there and then at least with his fingers? Probably been ok with his 'little prick' as the dominant arsehole has probably already been there.

The the little prick, goes and starts to feed her a fantasy about coming home and catching them in bed what a complete cunt.

File all that information away then get her thinking exactly what you don't want and still do nothing with the info. Even "You know you really blush when you lie, you always have, I've just never been concerned about it before. Do you really want a divorce that badly?"

It is that old line, " The destination does not matter, what does is the travelling."

...looking forward to chapter 3. 5 stars. Thanx!

Loklie

Even the most idiotic blind fool could see she has already had sex with Mark and his wife. Regularly. Mark has also had her virgin ass. She is just trying to get him on board as a submissive husband. Why drag it out? Regular girls or guys nights out without partners is always a recipe for disaster and should always raise red flags. The same goes for discussing private matters or sex lives with outsiders, friends or not. It should not be done. That should be only between partners.

The story is going on the direction I said it would. He is NOT going to find out that his marriage is a sham. She has been cheating now for over a month or maybe longer. Especially on those " girl" nights. She has been getting screwed at Mark and Suzie house. He is too blind and isn't doing anything to stop it. Especially when they were answering those questions, ok fine, he hopefully has a clue but will he do something, naw.

Divorce her now. Don’t wait.

Cant believe he was head huntedThe way he is missing the obvious warning signs she is cheating means he is simple minded.

For all his talk, the man is a complete moron. Even a blind man can sense she is in to something with the two sleaze bags, Mark and Suzie. But he still wont get his head out of his ass! This author takes a long time to wind up and before he does, he will have the MC crying and getting drunk. He can't let his hero actually be a hero.

You are a great writer, but get to the list. She's fucking Mark!!!

I prefer LW stories where the husband isn’t a passive dumbass.

Way past time for a PI

"you might think I was just being an asshole and only getting my own pleasure." - Even if he was, she herself said this was payback for giving HER her own pleasure the previous night.

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"maybe I just want to maintain my pride and wish for a strong dominant man to just ignore my verbal wishes and would enjoy him taking my last virginal hole.” - "A strong dominant man," not her husband? In any case, how is he supposed to know that "No DOESN'T mean no?"

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"I told her that one of my fantasies was to come home and catch her in bed with a lover." - Big mistake there!

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I agree with KingBandor, why not just call her out, nip it in the bud? Of course, that would kill the story, although it might open up another plot line.

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As Tajfa says, it's fairly obvious that she's at least SEEN Mark's cock and it's definitely bigger than Troy's, and given her new cock sucking abilities abilities and willingness to swallow indicates practice with Mark.

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I hate wives who hint/suggest/propose swinging/open marriages when they've already been cheating.

OK but.... why is his reaction to his wife's deceptive answers to very important questions, "I filed that little bit of information away...." Between parts 1 and 2 he must say that about 8 or 10 things he thinks his wife is lying about. Her reaction about whether she would want to see him fucked in the ass by a another man is kind of important, to put it mildly, as is her statement that she would like "a dominant man" to take her ass. Why isn't that the point when he starts to get direct and if necessary, confrontational. He is worried but not addressing the elephant in the room. Her questioning about his attraction to Suzie while he is going down on her should be the basis for a heart-to-heart about the other couple and what in the hell is going on.

And why would he"lie and make up a fantasy" about him catching her getting fucked by another man and he (hubby) getting comfortable with it, eating her ass while the imaginary lover is still banging her? I mean come on, I have to guess this is a set-up for her in the next chapter catching her and Mark and wifey telling him that she was just giving him his fantasy. He was adamant earlier that there would be no screwing around by him or wifey with other people and now he makes up a fantasy that is exactly that saying he would get used to it and like the idea? That is completely inconsistent with the character of the husband as portrayed until now and he would do this even as he is expressing his concerns about his wife's honesty and what might be going on between her and Mark and Suzie? Bad choice by the author because it doesn't make sense with what he has already written. Sorry but have to give it 3***. I hope the writing improves in next chapter.

How dumb is your MC? He should more proactive and not just react in a very mild way about that crap his soon to be ex wife is sell him. I'll try one more part but if he is not assertive I'll stop reading. You dragged this too much for my taste when it's obvious to anyone what¡s going one. Your MC has a binary decision to make "yes or no".

Like I said, after Part 1 of this story: "this train has already left the station". She is foolish or just becoming uncaring enough to send off 8 to 10 lies and/or reactions in front of her husband. That many lies & changes in her attitude about sex after the opposite for the years of marriage should tell him that she isn't thinking about these things, she is already doing them. She keeps looking for holes in his armor, to get him to buy in to what she is already doing with Mark and maybe Stacy as well.

Your writing about a dumb husband again and it gets tiresome..A husband would not try to play games as to "win her back". he would address the problem as soon as he recognised it,not "store it in his head". Come on farmer get real. In real life If she had not crossed the line,he has her change jobs,friends and the riot act read out loud and clear.. If the lines have been crossed,divorce papers are handed to her. You truly are getting to be aggravating making husbands and wives appear dumb..BE true life realistic. Yes the scenario is realistic,just not the reactions of the husband and even the wifes to it. A good story line that's been going down the tube. This is one of your stories heading into the stinker category. JZK

Yep, Uh Huh. As on reader commented that train has already left the station and the MC isn't on it. The ones on it are Marie, Suzie and Mark. Hells bells, I'm not certain that the MC even knows it's gone.Poor damn fool. LP

Is Mark really as fucking thick as he seems, all he does is file things away in his head when it’s obvious to anyone with half a brain what’s going on with his wife

I don't ole Mark is dumb, he just doesn't have any proof yet, he's trying to figure out how to get his wife out of this downward spiral and maybe neutralize the Martian Slut rate that appears to working on her. Well written story, it keeps me looking.

Lots of good descriptions and plenty of thoughts in this, I think it is nearly a real case.

The cunt will CHEAT!

This stupid idiot keeps "filling" away all this information his slutty wife is feeding him. IF she's not screwing Mark now, she will be soon. He is a fool for not finding out the truth that his marriage is in trouble. . The characters are awful, storyline is prodictable, and a blind person can see where this is going. Hurry up and end this farce of a tale of a "Loving Wife" or the slut and her dimwitted husband.

He’s a dumbass.

The author is stalling. We all know what's a happening. Only the main protagonist is still ignoring what's going on. This story so far doesn't need it's word count to explain what's the case.

What the fuck is wrong with this man? Is he a slow adult? An idiot?

Shit...that sex survey would have required me to be WAY more blunt in follow ups to some of her responses. And I'd have told her straight out that I knew she was lying to some of those responses. It would have been a much different outcome...and probably ended our marriage.

If you can tell someone is lying to responses like that? Then it's betrayal of the worst kind. It's cheating on your spouse. There is no excuse. And that's the end of the marriage. Game over. Divorce.

What does this dumbass do? None of that. He is calmly "filing" away her obvious lies for some future confrontation? And then still putting his mouth and dick in and on her holes? Despite the fact he knows she is lying and probably having sex with the teacher and his whore? Those two have definitely had STDs before. So...why wouldn't he immediately confront her and refuse to have sex with her diseased holes?

What kind of passive nonsense is this?

More drivel

Wind bag. About 2 paragraphs of story I. 4 pages.