All Comments on 'Making Him Squirm'

Sorry, but there was nothing here that grabbed me at all.

Also, writing "Mister" out in full every time is annoying; it places too much emphasis on something of no importance. There are other writers to do this (and Missus or Missis as well), but the fact is that they both just look silly.

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Loved your tale. Your vocabulary was very well chosen. The level of detail was exceptional. You really let me get inside her head. Their passion made me hard, and the conclusion left me soft. Very well done.

Thanks for writing. tom anon