All Comments on 'Making It Real'

by janders

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Zed56Zed56almost 12 years ago
Sad Story

1* Humiliation,Dergradation and no love are right around the corner. Fetish

RyeandGingerAyleRyeandGingerAylealmost 12 years ago
Very realistic...

..and hot! Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
She can fuck other guys but he can't fuck other women??

What the fuck bitch?

Vulcan_in_OhioVulcan_in_Ohioalmost 12 years ago
Nothing new here

I suspect this was written by a woman . . . Also, I think it would have been more effective without the switching of points of view. The story indicates the two were a couple, but does not say they were married. If not, she is hardly a "loving wife," now is she? Maybe Erotic Couplings or Group Sex would have fit better.

Huedogg2Huedogg2almost 12 years ago
vulcan my not have said it

so i'll say it for him....the story was WACC with slut wife just showing her true self. 1*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
WACC

What a waste,if you a woman send us/publicize your ID on this site for our(male) benefits.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Confusing

The constant switchng of POV was disconcerting and it is not clear if the couple are even married. At the begnning when thewife? was telling her tale she said that the cable guy was at her apartment. Is that where she meets her boyfrends?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Very well written and hot Loving Wife story.

1. This is swinging, not cuckolding.

2. The husband doesent want to fuck anyone.

3. Who cares what the sexless trolls think.

This is a sex site. Get over it. This is worth five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
admitted cuckold huecuck sets

the record straight - Wimp Ass Castrated Cuckold defines him so listen up when he spouts it. We need that real-life cuck to identify made-up cucks in stories.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 12 years ago
Crap

Total garbage. Waste of my time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Judas

rudely buggered cornhole, he smoked the fat meat, betrayed!

ErotonautErotonautalmost 12 years ago
Step by step

Pretty clear that next time Marisa's not going to be satisfied with just sucking a guy off, or maybe not even with just one guy. Tom better get used to walking to the back of the queue to fuck his own wife.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Womans Perspective

It's always great to hear a womans perspective and thoughts especially when she's ready to go for it.

ythebadgerythebadgerover 11 years ago
Whores don't kiss their clients

How appropriate thet he doesn't want her kissing anyone.

1jbm1jbmover 10 years ago
Hot story

I enjoyed your story and look forward to more.

Hot and very exciting.

Thanks

Joe

devilspy2001devilspy2001over 10 years ago
You need to do more chapters of this

Please, do more chapters of this. As his wife leads him further into the world of a cuckold. He has now had a taste of man seed, so there must me more to it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
1*

Pure fucking trash, not worth reading. "janders" rest assured I won't read you again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More chuck shit

Where are all the stories of the men getting over on the wife? I guess they aren't PC

iameaseliameaselover 2 years ago

Well I can see why this writers career was short and pointless.

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