by bi_cathy
Oh Cathy ... this is so beautiful ... just like reading poetry. I absolutely adored it :)
It was almost like a poem - thank you for this delightful piece of erotic fancy. Five stars.
I wish I was as skilful as this lady when I dallied with nipples,I suspect I was crude & fumbling,if enthusiastic,to repeat a sensual & erotic narrative
This is so artfully written, it's hard to conceive that it was indeed crafted at all. The themes of imagery work seamlessly throughout the piece, progressing to its conclusion, where they culminate in a delightful, unforeseen crescendo. Bravo. I love this.
I love suckling and making long and sensual love to a woman's nipple, and she mine. Thank you. Consider writing a full length story that openly expresses the pleasures of nipple stimulation.
thanks for this story....
Thank you - for sharing your beautiful talent so generously.
I have sent a link to my lovely girlfriend who is away at the moment.
Your words will melt her heart (as they do mine) - and light her flame...
And in due course, we will share these wonderful lines together, but unlike you, I can't find words adequate to describe what will follow....
Thank you.
What a beautiful, playful homage to such a perfect part of the body. :)
See what you have done. Another one of those glorious creation standing in all its beauty.
I never met a boob I didn't like, but to me it's all about the nipple.
Fantastic, lustful, erotic, graphic, superior descriptive, loving, soulful writing.
What pleasures you must be capable of appreciating !
Thank you
Adorable !
It’s not new to me, but coming across these wonderful lines again by chance feels like an unexpected encounter with a past lover - and feeling the springs of those past tremors of adored desire re-awakening.
Thank you (from an appreciative, if sometimes envious, male).
How is this not in the poetry section?
Of course, I'm glad it wasn't or I probably wouldn't have read it.
And that'd be my loss...
From the earlier comments, I see am far from alone in feeling a strong poetic vibe to the story. A delightful, lovely, vivid little story. Thank you.