All Comments on 'Making Memories'

It was pretty good but I'd barely call it incest.35

Good premise. Awkwardly written, made it difficult to read. Keep going, but maybe find a good editor.

Yup. Needs a sequel with Terry fucking his mom.

That was fucking hot and erotic. The incest category was fine with me. I hope you write more about them.

5stars🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Imaginative. Good luck with the contest

Didn't enjoy at all. 2.5 stars

I gave you 5 stars. Although it’s not incest yet, it’s really taboo and it fits in these Incest/taboo category.

It would be more exciting if in the future the story progressed with the mom and son became comfortable in doing oral sex at first. Then eventually with the encouragement of Julia the mother and son will end up in intercourse.

What others have said, there must

be son/mother action. Just a natural progression.

I think this is a great story. The category is incessant slash taboo not and. The mother and son don’t have to be together for it to be taboo. It would have made the story better. That could be in a sequel. Have them all get together again and slowly bring mother and son together. Anyway it is a great story and would love to read more. Thank you. 5 stars

Fun and exciting story! Would of been a nice twist if Terry, in heat of moment or accidentally, got involved with Petra orally or vaginally.

More, pleaseeeee

Loved it! Maybe in a follow-up chapter the mom and son could get physical! Five stars and a favorite point!