All Comments on 'Making Music'

I see this is your first Lit submission. And a very nice one it is, too. Would have liked a bit more character differentiation, but that will develop in time. You're off to a good start.

Thats great for the first time.

that narrative was absolutely awesome..love it

Nothing Really Tops Giving A GF Her Firs Lesbian Expierence.

Kisses

I liked the story, the dialog, the flow and the tartness of a first lesbian orgasm for a young woman.

keep writing PLEASE!!

Music & choral singing was certainly an ingenious setting for such a 'hot' tale!