All Comments on 'Maleficus'

This was a very good read, I thought it might be similar to Family Secrets with a family of coven of witches. I was pleasantly surprised by the whole story and really enjoyed it, I was wondering who was going to be having sex but by the end I didn't miss there not being any.

From your usual stories. A good story that needs to be continued.

A different but great story that would be suited being written as a multipart arc, failing that treat this as a prequel and write the next chapter as a multi party series as this was a really good read.

Well done! You've written a very exciting and magical story! One can only hope that you'll continue this with more of their adventures! Thank you!

Continue, it was getting good.

Fun story. I’m ready for your next one.

Superb, hope there's lots more to come.

An excellent story, thank you! I look forward to more of this saga!

Please continue this story with more chapters. I love this story and would love to read more about this family, his Fae and the magical world you have created here.

Hopefully, there will be more to come!!!

I like the idea behind the story, but it feels like a first draft not ready to be released. There’s parts that are a bit disjointed, skips in the flow of the story, some grammatical errors, and the lack of sex.... well, the first three can be excused but the lack of sex! That’s it! Take it back and get it right. Sex sex sex!

i do hope you continue this as series. would like to read more about this sage and his family

I keep coming back to this story hoping that it will be continued.

I would love to see you continue this awesome story.

This was a very interesting short story. You could even continue with if you wished. I gave it 4 stars because it felt a bit rushed.

The ending seems a bit rushed and lackluster but overall it was pretty good. A little editing advice. When a paragraph or set of paragraphs that ends a thought form and a new one begins such as a time lapse where a few months have passed which would technically be a chapter break. You could add a line of ******** or @@@@@@ or a extra paragraph space so that the reader following along can realize the change in setting or scenery.

This story is not completed yet. Too much is left hanging. Was this intentional?

it seems I have read this story before, maybe a year ago. did you post this before? It was a good read even though it had no sex in it. You need to edit the story more, there are still errors to be fixed. 3 stars

More please!

This is a good start for a series. I'm looking forward to the rest of it.

Great story third time reading this one. I think it deserves at least one more chapter.

Like many other I'd like to see you continue this story

One more chapter

Came here for fapping, stayed for the story! Sometimes, I wish I could be creative enough to come up with stuff like this...

Story like this should be longer.

I liked it, but it’s kind of short, will there be more chapters following?

Great yarn. Loved the brevity & flow. Proving the best fantasy doesn’t need to be weighed down by countless words. Would love to read more hope Charles is back again.

Well worth my time ... Would spend my time again if more story should magically appear !

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This was obviously left open for a series. What happened?

Definitely needs more please continue the story its a great start

Excellent story! I love how you give the characters depth.

You are an excellent writer.

I hope another chapter or 2 of this story is in the works. You have some really good stories and I look forward to reading some more from you.

Great story, one more I hope you can continue.

VERY imaginative. Well written and paced. Thank you for your time and talent. DMW

All of your stories are great but so many need to be continued I hope you have time to do so. Thanks for all your work and sharing it with us all.

I agree about both the quality and the fact so many just end. This was a great story with a good ending

Great story! I really enjoyed it!

5 stars

That was different but entertaining

🙊🙈🙉🤔😳

Unexpected but fantastic.

Part 2 please?