All Comments on 'Mallory'

Expertly told story about good people finding love.

You make it difficult for other writers to maintain a semblance of pride.

The next time I run into writer's block, I'm going to ask "WWRD?"

This the story that put you on my radar some years ago and you stayed one of my favourite authors ever since. I'm grateful that you reposted this one truly made my whole weekend so much brighter and gave me a perfect Sunday morning read. I gladly gave it another 5*, thanks.

Had liked some more about the action against the cops involved in the abduction of girls and women, and about her mother. Don't think a girl of 3 wouldn't talk about her mother at one point in time or woudln't want to see her, even from afar.

... and I almost didn't read it - because it was 4 pages.

I'm glad, very glad, I did read it.

Excellent work ... 5★

This has to be one of the best stories I have read in here. Great build up and so unique

life could be like that. Damn close to perfect story.

A special story that warms the heart and brings forth a smile!!!

I rated you as high as I have rated, excepting an old, old story.

I enjoyed this story, but honestly, when I hit page 3, I was praying for it to end.

Mistakes were tolerable, it just got a bit long winded.

I will look for other work you post.

Thank you.

Dang , do you write anything that isn't amazing ? You are by far my favorite author. Thank you for all you contribute on this site.

Your # 1 fan

Seadog58

Hope there is a follow up for Kim to get him as well.

Thank You. I enjoyed the great read. Waiting for your next story. Thanks

Thank you for a nice read :-)

A really nice read. Yes, like all things it could be improved ... keep writing. I really enjoyed your style.

Very nicely written, and is your name brandl, 1958 is a year . This probably did happen, I wish you the best of luck in your relationship

Story was great in terms of romance......... but was this supposed to be in Incest/taboo? And i was wondering about kim when she said she already has a "little boy" is there going to a follow up story? With kim as a main chracter?

Certainly my favorite of yours.

Of course it does! The story deals with a man who takes in a 3-year-old girl, adopts her (becoming her legal father) and raises her. When she's 18, they make love for the first time. And, five years later, he marries her.

Granted, the story happens to take place in Florida - which is one of only TWO states in the United States (Ohio is the other) where making love to an adult adopted son or daughter does not class as incest. So, if you happen to live in Florida or Ohio, this tale might not class as incest, to you. It certainly does, to the rest of us.

You have an amazing ability to craft realistic relationships and stir the emotions of the reader. I love your writing and talent. Thank you for sharing this beautiful love story with us!

You have missed mentioning about sister's lover?

Really great story. Almost too good to finish,

Great ending left the door open for next saga but not disappointed.

Bob Sr CEO Fieldtechs

Interesting read but what about kim

That was really, really good! I kept expecting the other shoe to drop, a bad feeling about the bad cops showing up at some point early on, glad they didn't since I don't care for that type of story too much.

I also expected his sister to be falling in with the two at some point, thinking that she also was in love with Val. Guess it wasn't to be. Sigh.

All in all, a very sweet love story!! Thanks :)

You told a very good story, with great attention to detail. I wish you told us more about Kim.

absolutely delightful and very erotic. You do this sort of thing very well.

A wonderfully written story.

Hooked

Never knew what hit him

Always appreciate authors who treat Foster care and adoption with respect. There are some bad Foster Parents out there, but there are more good than that. there are some bad CPS situations, but the kids that are rescued need their help.

How can you not give this Story 5 Stars .. I have read this one many times

No matter how many times I read this story it never gets old. I feel like I actually know them and wish there were more people like Val. Beautiful father-daughter story that smoothly moves to an adult love story. From the day Val rescued Mallory you could feel they belonged together forever. You truly are a gifted writer.

As usual, a superb story. Great characters, great plotting.

Hi Randi. BJ again.

I am sorry that the rating scaled stops at five. This story rates much more than that. This is your best masterpiece yet in my view. I've already read it three times in a row. I can't get enough of it. If my eyes were gradually erasing the text during each reading, the text would soon disappear completely.

If you have a bad day, reading this story will pick you up and make your day. If you have a good day, reading this story will make it soar even higher. This story is like an orgasm for the mind.

Thank you for tying loose ends at the end and telling us where the core characters are now. I would have like to know more about Kim. Will there be a continuation of this story some day?

BJ

Great story. BJ beat me to the punch again (ditto everything he said). This one definitely goes in favs.

Great , great story. AAAAAA++++++

A 6/5 story, but it wasn’t incest tho. Not really LOL!!!?

But l loved the story, thank you.

Good but had an abrupt ending

Not my favorite genre but, the story was so well constructed that I forgot it was not my favorite genre. 5*

Ms.Randi's kid stories are adorable.

Father daughter intro to sex conflicts with pedophilia pseudo incest erotica while vicariously interesting still is confusing, since it is coloring outside the lines of conventional social mores. Entertaining, different?

Very Romantic und Sweet!

11/10!!!!!

As usual Randi paints an adorably perfect little girl wrapped up in a feel good story. My only issue is with the marriage at the end. I doubt the school and community would just forget that they are legally father/daughter. Maybe if they had moved where nobody knew them...but that's just a minor critique of an otherwise heartwarming tale.

I am in tears. I loved it.

You have done it again, just when I thought you couldn't get better, you did!

I have found that very few people can write convincingly about sex, most are embarrassingly bad, but you are up there with the best, if not the very best.

In short I loved this story and had wet eyes several times, both their love and her physical beauty were described wonderfully and I felt right there with them.

So very well written. 5 * just aren't enough. That being said, technically, this isn't incest in the tru meaning of the word. Incest is between blood relatives, so father and adopted daughter while not being acceptable in many cultures, still makes this the hottest INCEST story of my day.

I stand by the comments I made about one year ago. This feel good story is just what you need, whether the sun shines or when it rains. Thank you very much for this story.

Again 6*++++

BJ

Still wondering who Kim was seeing

Beautiful story of love and wholeness. Thank you.

Still wonder about Kim's boy.

"Mallowy". Goddamn it just hearing that little pronunciation in my head as something a 3-year-old says, confused at the situation, then that whole exchange... yeah, this grown-ass man cried. Sue me for being a decent human being with feelings and emotions! Complete and utter animals that could even conceive of doing something like that to an innocent child. Makes me sick. I shudder to think of what her life would have been like if Val hadn't saved her.

That journey and transformation from the scared little girl to the beautiful young woman that's in love with her father truly was something. My one complaint is that it felt somewhat rushed and that I would have liked to see more detail in her life as it evolved. For me, it makes me feel more attached to the character, though I suppose a lot of people don't bother one way or the other. Also, her being a virgin added something special for me. It's like she was meant for her daddy and him alone, always and forever. I think that's beautiful.

This story was a little gem. The moment I started reading I was hooked. One of the best I've read. Thanks for this :) I just wish it had went on longer. It ended too soon! But at least the ending showed that they had started a family together and were well into their happily ever after. I want more stories just like this one. It was essentially perfect as far as I'm concerned.

Loved this story.

"... Thank you, Kim. You made me keep her. None of this would be possible without you. I guess we just need to find you a little boy now."

She laughed and glanced up at me. "I've already got one," she said.

"Tell brother about it," I said.

"Not now," she was snapping pictures. "Get that camera going."

If 'not now' WHEN??