All Comments on 'Mama Showed Me How to Seduce Daddy'

I like your style of writing and how you use the words, but in my opinion the story is a bit short.

Unless you are continuing this Tory, it needed more details.

Great story well delivered. I enjoyed the fantasy.

Keep writing

Cheers

SAGE

Who was the the door?

When offspring resembles a parent, anything can happen.

HOT, HOT, HOT

Sounds like my Daughter teasing me!

Thank you for all the comments! They’re very helpful and I will consider each and every one❤️

If my story was hot for you I’m so glad to know that. My panties are usually soaked when I write erotica 😊 I hope I can continue to give you hard ons!

I like it, but it was too short.

Hi,I have read both your stories, love the work and hope you continue and that both will be multi chapter pieces

Sizzling. I want more.

Wow naughty straight story from the heart

Some want more detail; as for me, I think you got it JUST RIGHT- enough to paint the picture ( & get me HARD, BTW!); then the sex begins...

That was SOOOO fucking hot! Thank you! My youngest daughter and I have started watching porn together when her mom works late; our Pizza and Porn nights. But I just read your story to her...and while nothing has happened yet, I can just feel it's going to! You got her in the mood; and I'm going to benefit, THANK YOU!

Short, to the point and hot. Love it when a daughter sets the pace, then you know its not coerced which would be wrong. Naughty and nice.

you go on and on. I LOVE YOU PLEASE DON'T STOP YOUR STORYS

Nice and hot

so naughty&kinky,my wife and me have only a son but she loves to play as my slutty daughter in front off our son,and she,s in control

the doorbell? be a shame if someone just came for some reason, im sure our girl is vocal, and dad all desperate....

Hot story! Rather short though. Would love to read about who was at the door and what they heard. Great story. 5⭐

Nothing I love more than to read others' comments first. You do have a way with words! It's almost as if you are living in the stories as you draw us along in them too. I can't speak for others, but that helps us live in our fantasies. Keep it up.

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Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

The errors are distracting. Get a proofreader. Don't do that to your readers. Beyond that, not much of a story.