by Alleskeins1
It often only takes a moment for longtime attraction to come to fruition.
story! Hot and sexy mama, thoughtful loving son! Great read!
That was one hell of a story, but
you never finished it. Now that
really sucks, PLEASE FINISH IT.
It was well done,and a great
start.
..THANKS..
Hot story! When can we expect chapter two? You kind of left us hanging at the end.
Your continuity is off, though. You mentioned it was mid-August toward the beginning of your story. At the end, you stated there were only a couple of weeks left of school. Did these events happen over eight or nine months? Also, there were a couple of typo's or wrong words used. Good plot, maybe could have used more of a build-up between these two.