All Comments on 'Mama's Beach House'

A very enjoyable easy read, Ill be looking for your next submission.

I LIKED IT.

Enjoyable story. Keep them up.

It appears to have been written by a (rather unimaginative) robot

Other than a few missed words and some dodgy grammar it was a very good first effort. If you stay on this track and avoid the cuck or brutal IR stories you'll be well received. Best of luck on your next venture.

A great an Happy story. I think every one has a crush on someones Mom.. I am Happy for you.. Cheers

Well written.

Great story. Lots of fun, lots of love, lots of good sex scenes. Looking forward to your next work.

Enjoyed the story. What a shame that “Mama” didn’t experience anal sex. To have read that in this story would have been epic.

This is an exceptional first submission. You certainly have set the bar high for yourself on your submission. It had a nice flow. Perhaps the only thing that could have been a bit better was the seduction scene - reaffirming their feelings or being a bit more touching and caressing while they snuggled on the couch and how their bodies responded. But that's just me. Overall, though, a true pleasure to read. A rare 5 stars from me as well. You certainly deserved them, and then some. Looking forward to your next story!

Epilogue suggests there will be no part 2. To bad, mama was just starting to get her grove on. Never know there could be an little adventrue in trying anal in a part two..

Pay no heed! Great first attempt looking forward to more.

Wonderful read , not your straight forward wam bam over and out , took time to build the story and characters , please write some more and i am sure to add you to my favorite list .

Great first effort. Keep writing. Looking forward to reading more from you!

enjoyed it very much. look forward to your next!

Great story except no fireman wants to take a day job lol

Hard to believe this is your first story - very well done. Hope you have more to.... come.

a very good and engaging story, and hot as well

outstanding from fellow military.. Ooh Rah

Well written and look forward to more

Definitely a 5

It was a great read. Keep doing what you do

Great story!

5

Great story, enjoyed it very much. Please write more. I especially love older women and younger men erotica.

Very good!

Great plot and lots of loving sex for a woman who deserved it .

What can I say that everyone hasn't already said? Great story, loved it, keep writing.

Thanks for sharing.

A long slow building story full of descriptions and nice characters

Great story well written. I had a similar experience with an older woman and loved it. Thanks

Great story! Thank you for contributing. Look forward to more…

5 stars +++++. For a first story on Literotica, it was GREAT. Actually, for a second, fifty second or five hundred and fifty second, it was great. Please do not stop writing. Good luck.

Written like someone with lots of story writing experience. Well done! Looking forward to more great stories.

Excellent first story!

Thoroughly enjoyed that. Good story plus plenty of sex, interesting dynamic and well written! Which makes a change to a lot of the stuff that gets published here. Keep it up! Although perhaps not literally...

Really good !

Easy 5 stars for a great first effort. I see in your profile that you like older woman stories. How about, sometime soon, you let a younger man find his “happily ever after” with an older woman? I know first hand how appreciative a guy can be when a older woman takes him in hand and shows him what love is supposed to look and feel like. Just maybe……let your guy hang onto that and keep her for the rest of her life.

Just fantastic for a first story.

Mega kudos & 5 stars!!

WindySwimming

A great read and a decent plot with some great descriptions!! I like the "happy endings" portion too--although parts of me always wish the main characters would "connect" again and ride off into the sunset. (Fantasy ...right?) Thank you for a great story and I hope you will write more like this one!

Great story, well written, engaging and descriptive without being pornographic. When is your next one going to land on the site?

Great story, five stars worth. My only complaint is, Mr Eastman can pack up his own junk! Never would a jilted wife pack up her X's shit for him.

loved it!!!

Loved it!!!! Guess we all had someone we felt that way about. Nice to hear it came true foer you. Almost wished you had ended up with Momma, but the switch to the ex was really nice too.

Keep them coming. I'll be eagerly anticipating your next story.

Well written, good story line and a realistic ending. Enough sex in there to keep everyone happy, all in all a great story. Hope you stick with it, this site needs well written stories and both of yours tick all the boxes, thanks.

Like the mix of sex and story. Happy ending was nice.

l've just been on an amazing ride, well done.

good read, but split your story up into chapters so you can get more notice with multiple posts. It stays on the "new" board much longer and picks up more views

5 stars. Great story. Great sex. Great ending. Great writing. Keep writing please.

Amazing sex with a great ending, 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Outstanding story, very believable. Loved the older woman and young firefighter angle. RT

Nicely designed. Beautifully crafted.

Great story. Thanks.

Wonderful release for a frustrated woman! Thought they might end up together , but reality is apparent!

Really great affair for them both…relaxing ,sexual, invigorating!,

Great future ahead for both…with many fond memories of what used to be!

Thanks

NOT the conclusion I eas looking for; but still a good story.

Shame they didn't hook up but that's just the old romantic in me surfacing.

Good story.

Well done.

I loved reading this for a third time. The characters are real, with real emotions and real motivations. Excellent story. Thank you!

I really enjoyed this one.

Fantastic- well done!

Excellent story - I have read it three times at odd moments.

Had to smile at you wrote "cooked baked potatoes" - you do not cook baked potatoes - you bake the damn things!!!!