All Comments on 'Man of the House'

Very good. I like how the mom loses control and fully submits to her son. Looking forward to a next chapter.

What a shocker

Dead bedroom, check

Son is huge and bigger than father, check

Mother can't control herself, check

Father is made fun of, check

Oh and a first time writer too. That's different

I love mom/son Man of the House stories! Five stars and a favorite point!

Amazing first story. I hope you are already working on Pt. 2. Sober noe but you need more from him.

Next chapter

More chapters pls

love it hope ther would be more in the future

Great start. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Let me know if you'd like to bounce ideas off one another.

Too bad my mom never drank

she really let loose! On your bio page, your fantasies align a LOT with this mom's imagination and words as she gets railed by her son! I'd say your inaugural effort at writing for us was a smashing success! Hopefully your kinks got a workout, too. I know mine did. Thanks for writing!

Well written and kept the reader's attention. Really not crazy about the humiliation of the husband, but I guess some people get off on that.

Thebard77,

You forgot one: the incredibly cliched title

A great first story. Looking forward to more.

Such a great story. Erotic build up and inner monologue with a great sex scene. Bravo

Great first story, 5/5. This one is worth a chapter 2 for sure. Thanks for this!

I really enjoyed this story just wish it was a little longer!

What happens next???

Thank you everyone for the comments/critics!

Great story! I wonder what new kinks await them?

Great story. This needs a pregnancy.

Loved this story I guess mom was a sex dynamo waiting to explode !! It was to short you need to continue with more. 5 STARS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

First story in and you nailed it

Please continue with another chapter or 2 and bring in the sister later when the mother is fully under his control.

Seems Mom was just a slut waiting for the right cock to come into her life and pussy. Wouldn't think Shawn would be too happy about things and Sarah might just end up in Loving Wives. Oh well.

Looks like major counseling, divorce coming in future chapters. Very well written for first story, better than many authors that have been doing it years. Looking forward to following you!

This was amazing! I really hope to see more stories from you. Absolutely incredible!

Would love to see a part 2. Make dad watch and eat a cream pie.

awesome story, I hope there is more to this.

Soooo hot. Big dick son gives it to his mom. Now he needs to do his sister. Later.