All Comments on 'Man on a Mission'

exciting story. play acting to the extreme with your wife. doesn't get much better than that. thanks

Why bother to read on? The real question is why you bothered to write on without having any iinterest in getting the language right?

A beautifully written story and all you can do is get hung up on one word? Oh and by the way it's "interest" with one 'i' not two. Noob

...you might want to get someone to edit for homonyms. They broke the flow of the story too much. E.g. courier not currier, ruse not rouse, teeming not teaming,

Very enjoyable. Thanks for writing. *****

I wouldn't have said this at the top. Let the reality sink in instead.

Thank you so much!

Enjoyed every moment of it. I can see this tale making hot horny savages of both male and female readers. It did us!

A currier is a processor in the early stages of leather preparation. There are just too many mistakes for me to get into the story. It demands an editor.

I really enjoyed your story. Your writing is evocative, compelling. It draws the reader into an unfolding drama of a re-energized relationship, while gently reminding those of us in "real life" of the dangers of routine, of how easily it is to take precious things for granted. And how much thought, foresight and planning it takes to escape from it, if only for 48 hours.

I think you're one of the best writers I've encountered on this site; I'm sorry to see that for three years now you've been drawn to other interests. Maybe later, when life slows down . . .?

Thanks much

Let's go Brandon! By the way, it's ruse amongst so many mistakes.

Very romantic, but too many misspellings, doesn't anyone use spell checkers?

Awesome story