All Comments on 'Manchild'

We will see where this goes, but good husband

The writing was superb, but the premise is just a bit too much to take. A middle aged woman, on her second marriage, with a son somewhere in the back ground, just hangs it all out on the line for a 19 year old manchild, who happens to be a friend of her sons. Her husband willingly invites the manchild over for a barbecue, cooks him meat and then gives him a shot at dinner seconds with his wife's meat. Come on, really! Her husband conveniently heads to a friends house to watch a game and give his wife a chance to fuck manchild's brains out. Dawn breaks after a ridiculous number of big O's is had by both the stupid wife and mr. manchild, and still no sign of hubby. The only way to logically end this story was for wife to wake up and realize all this bullshit was a dream!

Extremely well written! A very easy 5*, more of it were possible! Chapter 2? Thanks for writing!

Very hot story! I want more. Since she sees her husband's car in the driveway it probably means he came home while she and her lover were sleeping of fucking. How will her husband react and respond when she sees him? What happens when she goes back in the house to find him? Will she see her lover again? Will he own her pussy? I want to know so much more about this evolving love story -- or sexy story! Good job!

loved the story. Has a good start. While reading you mentioned a few other college boys, Maybe a few other will join in the future. Maybe a little gangbang action?

will be a chapter 2

Yes, the appeal of a MILF situation with an younger man is strong. But what made this a sick and disgusting episode was that the MILF decided to fuck a good friend of her son! Now that is just ridiculous. The son's friendship with the guy is now doomed, once he finds out his "friend" is fucking his mother! Also, she allowed another friend of her son's to observe a "teasing/flirty" meeting and also kissed the Manchild half her age in front of them and in front of other gym goers. Now many of them will be thinking "yeah, a hot MILF slut" and will attempt to "chat her up".

Again, totally ridiculous. The son will eventually find out! But before then, the MILF will have a reputation as being the cheap slut that the young guys can "flirt and try it on" with. This doesn't make sense and is not realistic at all. If this type of thing happened while they were on holiday somewhere where no one knows them... OK. But now, "Manchild" will be back for more... and so will his friends!

Her husband is a moron for allowing and encouraging this. The dickhead. So does this mean he will want to fuck some of his son's girlfriends from College?

Very hot story, well done :D

This is so hot…….hopefully there will be few more chapters to come. You need to get off birth control and let him knock you up.

Outstanding! Please, please continue their love/sex story.

Excellent! I wonder if this was reflective of the author’s experience?

Please keep writing - I look forward to reading more from you!!

Gotta say....this is my favorite story of all time, bravo!

Great story! Please continue!

Great story. Well written, literate, sexy. I hope you write more!

Sincerely,

Cuckold Paul

SUPER HOT story!!!!! Congratulations!!! Amazing start in Lit!!!

Just another fetish-cuck fantasy to add to the thousands already here. Impossible to tell something new.

Wow that was hot (and well written)!

I could be her, having fucked one of my son's university fraternity brothers for over two years with my husband's permission. It ended badly when my son was told by a friend about the situation. I had to admit to him that I had been his pal's whore. Not all situations that give great erotic and physical pleasure have happy endings.

An amazingly crafted story with such attention to detail! Such a complex story with interlocking themes. What a wonderful imagination, please write more!

Hi, it's "Sexy Mel" in the flesh! My little story had quite an eventful first day, with 12,000 views, 37 likes, and 21 new followers. But I certainly didn't expect it to be so polarizing@ The sub 4.0 score as well as the comments suggest that some people really liked it, but others had issues with at least some elements. The comments ranged from "sick and disgusting" to "my all time favorite" which is quite a spread! Anyway, thanks for reading, and I appreciate all comments, favorable or unfavorable!

A little constructive criticism. Loved the story, but for a story of this length there was too much caricature conversation and development. It could have Been a better story in a longer format or multiple parts. Great effort!

The problem with having sex outside of marriage is ; when it’s with a guy who has the stamina , multiple orgasmic , overly well endowed and is twenty years younger with a very fit and muscular teens body , she’ll want it again and again and again . Compared to her strong virile well endowed husband Anthony will be her bodies desire and her body will betray her marriage , even to the point that she gives her heart over to him . There’s a reason you should ‘forsake all others’ because a marriage doesn’t have room for three , someone is going to lose out in some way or another , they’ll either divorce or he’ll become some wimpy shell of his former self , a pathetic cuckold . When’s the last time the wife had that incredible of a sexual experience ? Never has she , not by her husband nor anyone else . Hubby isn’t gonna do it for her any longer not like he used to before the idiotic bonehead move to allow a third party into their marriage. She and Anthony will lose all respect for hubby and her sluttiness will bring forth Anthony’s two friends and she’ll be transformed from a milf to mif (mother I’m fucking) or more than likely a mwaf (mother we’re all fucking) . How’s that going to go over with her son , knowing she’s fucking his former football team members from school , guys that were supposed to be his friends?

Next time Dan needs to watch Anthony fuck her.

Meh. Another chuck.

Amazing writing. My favourite line: "I kegeled for all I was worth."

I agree with Anthony -- exquisite. Ignore the haters, this is HOT. Genuinely glad I read it.

And yes, we need a chapter two!

😉💚

Another story where a woman is only satisfied with a BBC. What a dis-service to men that aren't BBC's.

Damn it.

she is on the pill.

Great story!! Gave you a 5, I do hope you continue this with a few more chapters. Has so many different directions it could go. Does she end up a hotwife? Does she end up with a divorce? Does she go off the birth control & get bred? Maybe a gangbang is in her future? It’s all hot to think about. Hopefully her son is in on this behind the scenes. I’m pretty sure hubby has hidden desires to share her with others. Either way you did a great job laying out the foundation for several more chapters. Good luck!!!

Very well written. Good story and sharing is one of the topics included in this category. You are clear about your topic, so maybe some should just skip reading it. Surprised your score is as high as it is since so many here will automatically give you a one and a nasty comment. 5 stars.

Awful

what a wonderful quality story … I can’t wait to show it my lover … which is not true of that many stories here .. you have written it nicely and respectfully which she will love :))

what a hot story … it’s so much fun being proud of a sexy partner with a higher sex drive 🥰

Thank you for the great story. More Please!

Nothing new, just another fetish cuck fantasy like thousands already here.

Gave it 5. Excelent

Ignore the trolls. Waiting for your next work.

Yea, while I may agree with some of the trolls that the storyline may not have been very original, there was something about the way you told the story that came across as more erotic than others have. Keep it going. This needs a second chapter.

Well done! I would like to know what went on between her and Dan, but this was intense. Thanks for writing.

Amazing story, super hot, ignore the haters you're doing great!

Outstanding, I thoroughly enjoyed your story, please continue.

Hot and every young guys dream. A hot friends mom taking your cock. Hopefully her son doesn’t find out. She will be dped eventually by the other friend as well

"What's upstairs?"

"The bed where my husband fucks me."

I think your going to need a bigger bed (!)

I would like to hear Dan's side of the story. I imagine he heard quite a lot, do you think he watched you at all ?

Great story and very well written. I would love for part II, be the breakfast conversation the next morning.

It was especially erotic reading this story after my chat conversation with Sexy Mel who confirmed this actually happened.

When I was a teenager I worked at a full service gas station and a classmates mom would stop in for gas. It was our policy to wash the customers windows while the gas was pumping. She was a delicious MILF and she knew it. While washing her window she would bend over showing me her tits or set there with her legs spread showing me her panty covered pussy. I told my boss one day and he said she wanted to fuck. I told him it wouldn’t be right because of our ages. He told me I was stupid! He said she wants a little sex so give it to her. He said there is no pussy better that old married pussy because it doesn’t smell, tell or swell. Since that day I tried to fuck as much married pussy as I could get into.

He was right to a degree, what he didn’t tell me was that when the married pussy is the same age it might become your pussy through divorce & remarriage.

Bottom line Sexy Mel, keep writing. I believe you took a weekend trip away with your manchild not long ago, tell us about it. Also tell us the conversation you had and are having with Dan. I’m sure a lot of us would be interested in his take.

Excellent story, well written. Probably could only have been written by a very experienced, sexual woman.

The only part left out was the hubby/wife reunion sex. Part 2

Well written and highly enjoyable. I love the fact that her husband encouraged her to enjoy herself, but without the humiliation that goes with duck stories. This was hot wife, and much much better because of it.

Absolutely great story!

I absolutely love it can’t wait for you to write another one I wish I had a wife that would like to do something like this she had affair one time with her boss it turned me on so much still can’t stop thinking about it

Would like to hear about her conversation with hubby that morning, a rematch Friday with Anthony taking her out to dinner and dancing... maybe a long weekend to the beach... Anthony getting a football scholarship at an in-state college and she goes to all his home games and rewards him afterwards.

Passing through a pheromonal fog of nascent lust and passion!

need to write part 2

Incredible story. Can’t wait to read more!

When are we going to get part 2 you are so good can’t wait

this is easy the best I have ever read.5555stars.

Melanie h2o you have to write more . you write like only a woman can.

Absolutely loved the story. Please write second part soon. I would love MILF to get pregnant with teenager man.