All Comments on 'Mandy's Brother Ch. 02'

by JoannaF

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
HOT!!!!!!!

JoannaF, That was a well written story. You gave the readers a point of view from a woman's side and most stories here don't. The story had nothing it but erotica and pleasure. Good job and keep the stories coming.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great story!!!

Well written story that is superbly erotic and hot as it gets!! Keep writing...no need to go into fiction, unless you don't have any more to tell...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
wow

Keep going and love it...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
My oh my

I really have enjoyed your stories. Please keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
More Need More!!!!!!

You have to finish it with more data. I am dripping help me!!!

No really great wish i could meet someone as wild as you

Keep it cumming, Get wild!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Truly Loved You'r Story

Great keep up the good work and let us hear more about

Mandy, Julia, and Jacob......Please

dalchrondalchronover 11 years ago
Wow

I don't usually get into D/s stories, or stories that have that element in them, but this story was HOT!. I loved it. I would love to hear more of it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
kill

somebody should kill that no good bastard to bad i am not around him fixe him good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
* * * * WRITING - 0 * 'S EDITTING

the odds of him actually WANTING to let me up was remote (were)

had to bare the exquisite torture (bear)

my face red as a beetroot (beet root)

Jacob through the vibrator onto his bed (threw)

taping my feet on the floor tapping0

finished your assignement yet (assignment)

a small fake penis inside my pussy was then just being on my knees with one inside me.(than0

stair case (staircase)

laying on his back on the bed (lying)

I melt the room (smelled)

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