All Comments on 'Mapping out her body'

Beautiful! I like a good lovestory between mom and her son, i hope that she got pregnant, please, tell us more of their love and lust.

5 stars.

Some good descriptive content. “Losing himself in the eroticism of the moment.” Excellent description of her feet, toes, “she looked on in anticipation. Having a very good idea of what would probably be happening next.” and then oral on toes! Good. Additionally, you did ok on the tit’s description. “The hard, pointy nipples, a perfect shade of pink.” However, your description pf mom’s pussy, leaves a lot to be desired by this reader and I suspect most others. For example, while you talked about the wetness (very good), you did not describe the size of the clit, size of the cunt lips (engorged or thick), and you did NOT mention pubic hair at all (trimmed bush, full bush, thick bush, abundance of pussy hair, her dark triangle). Failure to include pubic hair descriptions causes many readers to infer this is a shaved pussy on a 40-year-old! That does not EVER work for readers in mom (40+ years old) stories and here is why. Moms are not shaved (EVER)! Readers who read mom stories are looking for a MATURE woman story and mature does include a description of how much pubic hair (ALWAYS) mom, aunt, mother-in-law, (mature) has. Readers of mom stories are not ever going to be look for mom described as a 19–20-year-old having a shaved pussy. Seriously, and dammit!! You should know this! Shaved descriptions go in the teen 18-year-old category, the shaved category, stories with bikini and beach scenes, some of some lesbian stories where wet and slick tribbing is involved. But shaved pussies rarely belong in mom (mature woman) stories, unless her sons wife or her own daughter (husbands sister) wants mom shaved to eat her pussy while her son fucks it from behind. Most important, after the shave, mom is going to have a chaffed, razor burnt pussy with stubble, infected hairs, and pus oozing pimples. Not what you want your readers to think about when you fail to put any hair on mom’s pussy (women in general) in your stories. You seem like a good author. So, do not do that. Your peer ratings will suffer for it. I gave you a 4 for what should have been a 5

Too harlequin romance for me, simply stopped reading.

As such, did not rate BUT did notice others were very pleased so, please continue writing as I am not your only reader.

Son's should worship mom and make her satisfied. Nice loving story

Liked the story although it was just a one time sex gave it 4 stars cause it was too damn short!! Please continue!!!!!!

It was a nice story but it was too short you need to continue 4 stars