All Comments on 'Mara'

Fantastic start to what I think could become a very hot sexy sibling romance. I do lovee a sexy ssibling love story so please keep going.

Good job. You say you're new. You did well, I think.

drive me crazy

The great writers tell a story. Your transitions suck. Too much of the story is left out. There were several interesting facts about the male character, but never developed, just dumped. Same with the female.

So far so good....I'll keep reading this...

Great so far - keep the chapters coming!