All Comments on 'Marcus, Maryann Plus Kerry'

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"get some clarification and a better understanding on some of the activities."

Is this a part of a series? if not then everything here should be explained in this story. If it is a series then give them part numbers in the title like good authors do.

Thank you for your feedback. Next time I will do a better part explaining within the story.

If you read all my comments in the beginning of the story, I suggested that you may want to read my other stories if you DID NOT understand portions as I reflected on parts from my previous stories.

This story was a separate story using the same characters from my previous stories.

If you read or noticed my other stories, I did reflect it as a Andy Decides to Become a Model: 4 Part Series

Happy writing.

… but your story jumps around a bit too much, and I found the grammatical and logical errors very distracting. A sympathetic editor would help immensely.

Thanks everyone for the feedback.

This will assist and help me enhance my writing.