All Comments on 'Mardi Gras'

I got lost in the story and quit reading. He had her remove her panties and put them into her pants pocket. She pulled up her pants. Next they met in a crowd and he slid his finger up her pants into her pussy followed by his cock. How did he get up her pant leg? This is where I got lost....

First of all, thank you for your feedback. I will keep this in mind for future submissions. Secondly, I’m sorry you got lost in my rambling thoughts! I sincerely hope you found an enjoyable story elsewhere on the site. Hopefully, you can enjoy some of my future submissions!

I like you story it was naughty and fun. But the clothes don't work out. She took off her panties and pulled up her Jeans. No where does it mention her jeans coming off on the dance floor and they had to come off for him to pull the panties back up.

I like your style a lot even with the inconsistency.

A dress would have worked better, but I did enjoy reading your story. It made me think about some old adventures i had many years ago.

Plz take me with u

Loved the story quick but hot

A rock hard cock arose as I read these beautifully penned words that sounded like it flowed from the mind of a personal experience! I loved it! Thanks for sharing your link!

Awesome story!!