All Comments on 'Mardi Gras Magic'

Too predictable when the club moved to a town right next the daughter the secret of who it was went out the window

Insufficient tagging results in poor ratings without even reading. Add to that problem that I did read the last 4 lines and found that you had somebody's smile pushing a plate away. If that's typical of your 'writing', I have no desire to ever come across that kind of garbage again.

Nice story. Predictable or not, i liked it.

5 stars

Ok, predictable but discovery and conversations were amazing. Can you say conspiratorial?