All Comments on 'Marianne Ch. 03'

by valexander

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fakers51fakers51about 19 years ago
No wonder she want Matt..

This woman and man have spent most of thier time fucking, whic is bound to wear off. She have not cooked a meal, wash a dish, made a bed, clean house or done any of the things a house wife is supposed to do. So to Matt all she is a fuck stick and she should let it go like that. She should abandoned Eric and move in with Matt then all they have to do is go to work come home eat and fuck. I guess that is what Marianne wants, why go moralistic and think of her husband when she has been fucking almost no-stop for the last 20 days. One time is adultery, but 15 days????

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
gdfhtfthuf

there is a thing called "too much sex and no substance"and sorry to say thats what the story is bout!though the plot seems nice

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
great romance story

A beautifully written story, full of tenderness, with a plot that holds the reader's attention from beginning to end. The romantic scenes of the story are, however, too few, and certainly much too brief, especially given the talent of the writer. Unfortunately, this entire romantic story is only four chapters long.

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