All Comments on 'Maria's First Time'

Very realistic.

Good story. I only have two problems, 1) I have never seen an allyway in a park and 2) why do authors insist on females have grotesque tits.

Whoever made the comment about an alleyway not being in a park is an idiot. He (or she) completely missed the story. That's too bad... because it was great ! So much better than most of the crap that's posted here. Thanks for sharing !

I really liked this story. It was hot and sensual and you have a nice style of writing.

Excellent job, well told and extremly exciting!

Well done! I think our first time, whenever it comes is disappointing. I like that you took it for whatever it could be and remembered the parts that thrilled you, even with naughtiness. I guess I remember mine that way, too, though I hadn't thought of putting it that way.

Anyway, as nice a piece of writing as I've seen on the subject and as usual, done with class and a lovely touch of sensuality.

I also read the poem about Sarah and really, really liked that. I like to remember Sarah's eyes, myself. And, yes, by myself.... lonely in the night.

Your story is somewhat bittersweet, but very erotic. I suppose we all have different memories of our first time--some good, some not so good. You've fairly accurately portrayed the emotions going through a virgin's head and body as she experiences her first climax through sexual intercourse.

Great first time - erotic - taboo - reluctance overcome - not planned - not expected - unstoppable - strong unforgettable orgasm.