All Comments on 'Mariella's Bottom'

More please....heh heh

It was just getting good....don't leave us hanging...I can't wait.

I would have given you a 5 rating, had it said to be continued!

This was AWESOME until the end. I am very much like Mariella (though less than half her age) and only get to experience anal sex vicariously... why didn't you give us real-life ladies the same courtesy you gave Mariella, that of being able to cum along with the character in the story?

Exquisitely well paced, and carrying just the right erotic weight all the way through, never flagging. As you know, the ending is just right: the penetration. Nothing more is needed; all the work was in the build-up and eventual accomplishment.

Simply just perfect & sooooooooo sexy

Nicely done. Would love to find an older women who loves to have her rose bud rimmed and played with like your story. Thanks you.

What a well written and amazingly erotic story. The mind is the greatest erogenous zone of all, and you clearly understand how to stimulate it and send it over the edge. BRAVO!

oh how I wish I could experience this

Warm, gentle, and affectionate - just the way sex should be. Beautifully written, like so many of your other stories.

I especially like the fact that Mariella isn't all pert this and perky that. Instead, she has the feel of a real woman, one who wants adventure at every stage of her life. I hope to see her again.

Really nice story and I do enjoy your writing about my favourite, but frustrated, deviation, that plus the mature aspect is especially appropriate at my age. And English as well by the spelling.

One thing though, Mariella achieved her wish but did she achieve climax

Did Mariella achieve a climax - oh yes, I would think so, wouldn't you? It's written in the expectation that she would.

Sorry your fantasy is unfulfilled, but you never know what might happen at any age.

And .. Oh Yes! Both author and character are English

There could be a sequel with our heros forming a team to write more hot stories lol

Your story is erotically hot to say the least. The way you have lead us readers to the conclusion of the this one, only has us panting for more. Please DO!!!

As a 47 year old anal virgin who longs for an encounter like this, I adored this story. Only wish it went further. Would've loved to have heard what the rest of being anally pleasured felt like for Mariella, especially the feel of Leo's ejaculation inside her and his withdrawal, leaving her stretched with a rectum full of semen.

Liked the structure of the story, disappointed at the final scene.

This story isn't finished. The visit needs to play out and then a discussion with her useless husband...throw him out due to his pathetic love making overall and lack of anal specifically.