All Comments on 'Marilyn Goes to Hollywood'

Please, continue!

Also, i'm going to check your other stories!

run Jamie while you have a chance it appears your so called girlfriend was setting you up to be a cock sucker now is the time to get in the car and leave because you already suck cock next the so called gf will be having your ass used to keep her job and when the director find out you are a man there goes your job and gf time to really think about what is about to happen to you as of now you are a prostitute saving gf job when she is out of work or has moved on from you that is exactly what will become of you

I was enjoying it until you introduced jaimie sucking cock. Why cant Gil just enjoy her boyfriend/girlfriend and not have Jaime be coerced into sucking cock. Also, the coercion to suck the Hollywood guy turned me off too. Maybe it’s just how I am, but one, I dislike coercion, and two, I dislike when the guy who is dressing is pushed to start sucking or fucking guys. I personally don’t see the appeal and it kills the story for me. Oh well, I guess I’ll just have to keep looking for other stories that don’t end up that way.

Amazingly done, great read from start to end can't wait to see how the story continues .

If only I could give it a higher rating... 5 stars and well deserved

Loved it... Want to find out more... I loved Marilyn!!!

Great story. Girlfriend is a deceitful conniving bitch. She could not give a crap what happens to her boyfriend in fact if it came down to it, she wouldn’t have a problem coercing him into have full SRS as long as her career goes forward.

Like some of the anons, I liked it. But gf did seem like she was setting him up to be a man's bitch to further her career. I, myself, love pleasing men and women both. But I don't think Jamie wanted that. I hope she does enjoy becoming Jamie full time and realises she likes both. But it looks like she got turned into a hooker to me. But, it is all a matter of tastes really. I am curious to see how this all plays out though. I think Jamie may just like what is being done to her. You have a really good story going here, don't let criticism deter you from writing what you like. Five stars

I feel for poor James trying to help his girlfriend only to be told he has to look toward to giving blow jobs and further changes to look and be more like the original Merilyn.

I see that this story was written by an Englishman style.

I wish male writers would learn and understand women’s sizes. “Gillian was a mere 5'5" and 115 lbs. with firm 36B breasts...”. There is no way at her height and weight that she is a 36b. Maybe if she was 5’10” and 150 lb but she would look weird if she was a 36b at her height and weight. She would most likely be a 34b as the 34 reflects her torso measurement as measured just under the breasts and the B reflects her breast size in relation to her torso size.