All Comments on 'Marissa Arrives'

Please add more chapters I really enjoyed it

what a sick pair they are

I think they way it should go as the next guy who gets her would be a bald bodybuilder type as her scene partner (See Christian XXX for example)

"... he casually reached over and massages my round ass"

Do you have any idea how irritating it is to keep stumbling over your changes of tense, in the above example within just three words? Get an editor if you cannot spot this yourself.

I really liked the story and am myself becoming a slut like Marissa.

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Revenge is a dish best serv. ......OH MY GOD....Y yyyou as smell so.... yummy....

Yeah, there were a few grammar errors, but nothing that hurt the story. You wrapped this one up pretty well. But I would like to see more from you like this. Maybe something in the "Mind Control" or "Non Consent" category with bimbo characters.

Genuinely never understood this type of crap, here's the deal you cursed me I kill your sister if you don't change me back within 24 hours. It's quite simple really there should be no negotiation there should be no playing along you did this to get revenge for your sister? Okay here's the deal changing me back or your sister dies.

I ignored the few errors and enjoyed the story, I am sure no one slipped a pill in my drink but I must be a sissy bimbo slut, all I think about is pleasing big hard cocks x sissy Lucy.