All Comments on 'Marissa'

by valexander

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DarthGatorDarthGatorabout 19 years ago
A Feast

An erotic feast for the mind. You do have a way with words and sex, young lady. It must have been a tall building. At least I hope her office wasn't on the second floor!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Super great story! Hope it was a true one...

Hard to add much to my title but you seem to have a knack to get a male reader turned on. I sure wish I could find a gal like your Marissa; she sounds like the gal for me. I'm a middle aged divorced guy that only seems to attract girls that want me to be a completely normal straight guy... but I have the urge to have some fun with a gal like Marissa before I decide to settle down; I think if I could find Marissa, I'd marry her!

mandrake90@hotmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
great writing, but much too short

This story is really more of a romance than anything else, but it is unfortunately much too short, and this is true both of the plot and of the much too brief love scene.

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