All Comments on 'Mark and Barry Ch. 05'

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avidreader_01avidreader_01over 13 years ago
nooo!

you didnt leave it right there! i cant believe you would do this to me :) i really love the progression of their relationship...what will the boys do now? pls write faster, i have to know what comes next

tmr1995tmr1995over 13 years ago
What?

How can you stop right there. What's gonna happen next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Amaziing

Pleaseee continue :))

SthnGentMasterSthnGentMasterabout 13 years ago
Where's the rest?

Awww come on guy.... give us the rest!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Would be nice..

if you continue it... seems like it won't happen tho. :(

Nice work anyway :)

no_luvno_luvalmost 13 years ago
come onnnnn!!!!!

i love this story but it really really needs to continue. this sucks, it's like stuck at a dead end

hotlover69hotlover69over 11 years ago

good story well done

LoftyCraigLoftyCraigover 9 years ago
luv it

from straight to bi to gay, i came w/o touching

EmeraldGreenWhoreEmeraldGreenWhorealmost 7 years ago
More?

I know it's been a while and I've only just found this series but please tell me there is more chapters? This is a serious cliffhanger situation!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Confusing

Several mentions in this chapter were made of the guys fucking or c’mon let’s fuck. Did I miss some stuff? Up to this chapter there had just been handjobs and a bit of fingering of Barry’s ass, right? And these two have never actually fucked yet, correct? But this sex was hot! Poor Sherry. But I guess this cliffhanger was just abandoned in 2010, huh?

MRJT79MRJT795 months ago

Yet again I come to a story that takes you on a journey, creating a foundation of a relationship only to leave you ultimately behind unsatisfied.

This is one of the better stories, the kind I love.

Can anyone recommend any similar stories?

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