All Comments on 'Mark's Birthday Party'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Dreams cum true

WOW!!! Wish I had a Mom like that. In the next chapter how bout another mom join in the the fun or a sister??

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Great delivery!

Decent story, great plot!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
super story

i loved the story, well written, boys should all have a mom like that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Continue

I know it's been a while since you posted it, but please keep it going. It's an outstanding story.

wizard17wizard17over 19 years ago
more

please continue with the mother/son theme ; your stories are well written and i enjoy them a lot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Would love a continuation, was just getting interesting.

saturswingsaturswingalmost 13 years ago
Thanks...

A really good story. She was a good character. Only thing I wanted to mention is that once she started blowing her son the seven other guys ceased to exist. Good job though and hope you contribute some more.

hawk200377hawk200377over 8 years ago
not really incest

It was not really a story of incest there was no sex it was more a story for a group and voyeur

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
it was good untill

“That’s it bitch,” my son said, “ suck my cock. Show me what a slut you are. after that line the story sucks. sorry writer its only my opinion .

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
part 2?

getting good...can we have part two, where she's gang banged.

LegallySaneLegallySaneabout 3 years ago

Smoking killed the story. Completely. 1*

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