All Comments on 'Marlie Fucks on a Boat... Eventually'

The character buildup was described really well. Even though I know nothing about boats, you translated that into very tangible terms in a readable way. But the pace of the ending was extremely odd. "She buried her head in a pillow and wailed, then screamed." No emotional resolution, nothing afterwards. Did the characters get together again? Was it a one-time thing alone? Was this missing a page when it was uploaded?

Pagination was unfortunate, but that's the story. ;-)

Unusual story. Clicked seeking hedonistic sex *on* a boat, instead found a long character study about maturity and responsibility. It would have been annoying except that your writing is good and the lead character was touching. Perhaps more raw sex as well next time please?

Just keep being you. Your stories have intelligence, wit, and smut all wrapped up in a little package. And your titles..so damn clever. Keep it up.

Cheryl finally had a hard seltzer and watched others splash in the water for a time. The sun was just beautiful, she wanted to overheat a pinch before jumping in. By the time her skin felt like it was radiating out, she jumped in and the water temperature was just perfect. All of morning's annoyances disappeared in a flash, traded for wiggling her toes in the silt and running into a shell every few steps. Strangers, friends talking, music from several nearby boats clashing but harmonizing. Laughter. Splashing. Distant engine noises. A goodly cross-section of humanity in this little place. Mild horniness. This kind of fun just couldn't be described or substituted.

Would like to read more about this lead character. She has a mix of being a good person, having a good sense of values, and knows how to enjoy raunchy times. Requesting a sequel pls.

Well written, emotive, descriptive and fluid. I really enjoyed your story. Thank you