All Comments on 'Marnie'

wonderfully written,cant wait for the rest of it.

Please have another 9 parts. I loved it

Loved it, loved it, loved it! Ain’t it great when evil gets its due justice-Ha! I’ve been waiting for you to write another lesbian themed story and, as usual, you didn’t disappoint! Thirty lashes with a wet noodle for Pam and Simone! I was sad to read the ending, but hopeful when you said there is more to come. I’ll be waiting!

Looking forward to the continuation. CeeBee

Compelling story. I’m so grateful you didn’t stop this chapter before some justice was meted out. 😎 We will all wait, impatiently, for further adventures.

Love it, anxiously looking forward to the rest of this

Great story...nice buildup but I thought the take down of Simone and Mrs. Wentworth was a little rushed....hope to read more

A wonderful story, I'm very happy to see that it's going to continue. Thank you!

Awesome Story

I really enjoyed Marnie's 5*-Star Adventure🎉 and cannot wait for the next part!!

Oh please do continue this story. It is very good and I am now invested in the characters. The rape was difficult to deal with but the fact that she is now being faced with consequences is grand. Being victimized is traumatic and worse when nothing is done so thank you. Looking forward to further developments, thank you for the tale.

Enjoyed this story, especially the focus on Ireland, which is a place I love visiting. Looking forward to reading more.

After reading the most recent story surrounding Max, a truly captivating character, I re-read Marnie: poignantly romantic tale. So , hoping we will see more of her soon. And as a near hopeless romantic, any chance Marnie and Lauren reconnect? Love your vivid imagination and writing talent.

Sorry, but this whole story collapsed right from the beginning having a strong Irish temperament girl give in to a fucked up old hypocrite of a bitch and from that point on, Marnie's character was no longer believable. There was no way to "believe" her anymore. I found the entire ride to be trite, despite the superior local color writing and visioning. Marnie was too principled and smart to fall into that shit. And from there, I found nothing to be believable.

What is creative writing about, creation as in something in many different kind of Art ...... And Art is not to judge is for entertainment ...... Create something and enjoy ..... And yeah there are unbelievably intelligent women even at very young age out there, ...... This was for the former comment - chitsu

There was again the big part real life in it and unfortunately power is misused by many kind of beings, starts in family's then teachers or principals then friends or partners then colleges manager owner or name it , this is endless ...... So a sad ending for a starting love, but it was a razors edge from the beginning

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Sorry, I read the first page but there were so many cliches and telegraphed plotlines it felt pointless to continue.

I did continue, for about half a page more, but despite the good description the chatterley didn't appeal - I couldn't find the enthusiasm to invest my time in them.

Sorry.