All Comments on 'Marooned Ch. 01'

by ElsieThompson

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perrymichaelsperrymichaelsover 2 years ago

Great start.Just hope other chapters are not a year apart as you have been known to do in the past. (*Wine dark sea)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Six people in a 180? Uh, no.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So, the naked, teenage virgin magically has 'all the power' over five men on a deserted island. Oh yeah, that's suuuuuuperrrrrrbelievable. Not.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I was going to pass on this story - the title was too predictable, but it was well written, and Daisy taking charge turned it around. Hope part 2 keeps the theme alive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Absolutely beautiful. Can't wait for part 2

DunkirkDunkirkover 2 years ago

Looking forward to next chapter. Should be fun.

OdiouserOdiouserover 2 years ago

Absolutely wonderful. Nearly perfect word crafting. A very creative fantasy (why do some idiots criticise because you stretched the capacity of the aircraft. And OF COURSE the pussy owner is in CHARGE, What an idiot. I followed it and hope to catch the next chapter in the life of Daisy.

TrangSocTrangSocover 2 years ago

Please don’t wait too long for the next chapter.

ElsieThompsonElsieThompsonover 2 years agoAuthor

To anonymous, you're wrong. Cesna 180 come in two configurations: 4 passenger and 6 passenger.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really liked your story, are you going to continue? I’d like to see what happens

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