by ElsieThompson
Great start.Just hope other chapters are not a year apart as you have been known to do in the past. (*Wine dark sea)
So, the naked, teenage virgin magically has 'all the power' over five men on a deserted island. Oh yeah, that's suuuuuuperrrrrrbelievable. Not.
I was going to pass on this story - the title was too predictable, but it was well written, and Daisy taking charge turned it around. Hope part 2 keeps the theme alive.
Absolutely wonderful. Nearly perfect word crafting. A very creative fantasy (why do some idiots criticise because you stretched the capacity of the aircraft. And OF COURSE the pussy owner is in CHARGE, What an idiot. I followed it and hope to catch the next chapter in the life of Daisy.
To anonymous, you're wrong. Cesna 180 come in two configurations: 4 passenger and 6 passenger.
Really liked your story, are you going to continue? I’d like to see what happens