All Comments on 'Martinsville Mask'

If you'd asked me to pick just one of your stories as my favorite, I wouldn't have been able to. That was before I read this one. I absolutely loved this from start to finish. The only thing that could possibly make it better would be if you wrote a sequel picking up where this left off. Just ***** is nowhere adequate for first rate writing like this. MLF

I agree with MLF but do think you finished on the right note. But how about a story based on one of the other characters with Marty as a supporting roll/role.

I want to learn more about these characters. What happens to Marty in Martinsville? Does he return to Richmond, Vivian and Charlie? Does he develop more with Cory? Does he ever hook up again with Compton?

I think this story is complete. But how about the glass house? Is it what you originally want to write? Or some unpublished parts from your past?

"The Glass House" is a published habu work. It eventually will be posted to Literotica.