All Comments on 'Mary'

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Scotsman69Scotsman69over 13 years ago
A good start

And nice to see another Scot writing here. You have great potential and a natural writing style. Keep writing, and thank you.

humminbeanhumminbeanover 13 years ago
Huge fun!

It never gets old - people who love each other, exchanging happy sex up the the limits of endurance. Nicely done.

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