All Comments on 'Mary and Alvin Ch. 28'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Loved It

It was a romantic and serene chapter and I kept thinking you were going to drop the other shoe with Alvin,Jean or Stanley collapsing. Gladly it did'nt happen. Great work and thank you.

SAV12SAV12over 4 years ago
WONDERFUL

THIS A WONDERFUL MASTERPIECE, A JOY TO READ FROM THE BEGINNING TO THE END OF THIS CHAPTER. I HOPE THERE IS MORE. 5***** IS NOT ENOUGH. MORE LIKE 10 OUT OF 10. ONLY ADA STUART'S "LESSONS IN LOVE" COMES CLOSE.

Runner4069Runner40697 months ago

I feel like I missed a chaper? When did Seth and Charlotte have a kid? When did Andy and Jessica have their kid and get married?

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Still gets me that writers have zero concept of the acreage and labor it takes on a farm. In the Midwest a small farm is 1,500 acres. You can do small acreage farms but would be restricted to track farms ( vegetables) or specialty livestock but 12 alpacas would overgraze a 45 acre patch in a heartbeat. And the feed for them in a northern climate for 9 months of the year from cool down to the grass growing enough to be grazed on Jeezum Crow

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