All Comments on 'Mary and Alvin Ch. 29'

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Anonymousover 4 years ago

I haven’t commented on the every chapter but have really enjoyed your work. I do hope you continue the story because I look forward to reading more of the adventure.

maninvic over 4 years ago

Please

I have read this series multiple time all 29 chapters now. I truly love this story and can’t wait for the next chapter. Please keep them coming. I thank you for for taking me along for your story!

Anonymousover 4 years ago

Loved It

I can't get enough of your stories. You really choked me up with this one. The bond between Alvin and Bonita and Alvin calling out for Bonnie at the time of crisis was surpurb. You are one fine writer. Thank you.

Anonymousover 2 years ago

Wow!!! The Alvin-Bonita bond is amazing.

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