by JPGmvny
An almost perfect bitter-sweet love story and one I'd certainly recommend to all your readers. One of the best illustrations of the human condition I've read for a while now. The reason I've said "almost perfect" is that I felt the story ended a bit abruptly. Others may well disagree with me. Whatever, it's well worth five stars.
Wow. Thanks. Towards the end, I was having trouble balancing Mary's story with what was going on in the bigger one. I may have lost a bit of steam.
Absolutely well worth reading. It took me a little while to put this together with your previous story. Loved them both. Hope to see more from you. You definitely have a big fan!
SB
A really good addendum to the original story!
Again written so well and the words flow so easily!
Thank you so much for sharing this families story!
I've said it before but this entire story is fabulous!