All Comments on 'Mary Felix and Her Mistress'

That was fucking sexy

very very promising !

thank you

Why did you refer to the clit as "clitty"?; it sounds absolutely infantile. And what on earth did you make their clits and nipples so enormous for? You might as well have written a story about two feminine men with micro dicks. But that's not what I am here for; I am here for an arousing story about two actual lesbians fucking each other, with normals sized clits and nipples; for heavens sake! This story was already barely arousing at first, but turned out to be cringe-worthy and bland rubbish. Even 13 year olds on Wattpad can write more arousing and satisfying erotica than this abomination.

I liked it

A good and promising start. I have no problem with anyone’s “clitty”!

I loved it. Its 1902 not present day. People's attitudes were naive and less mature. Wonderful.

I love to see hard nipples through clothing, I've never touched another woman's body but fantasize about sucking a woman's big nipples. Maybe with your next chapter remember how sensative a woman's nipples are and include some nipple play and sucking.

In contrast to 'anonymous', I found this classy, well-written (never lapsing out of the period writing style) and very sexy.

I had also been most expertly seduced. Although entire story was quite erotic, perhaps the most amorous.

Absolutely beautifully written that captures the genre at its best. The “honey trap” got “honey trapped”.

Beautiful sweet and sexy. A pleasure to read. Thank you.

Delightful. At least eight out of five stars!