All Comments on 'Mary Mary, Quite Contrary'

Good start but a bit more character development if you add further chapters.

Hot Story so far!!

SO !

Borderline boring it's the same oh storyline boy has ten in dick women has a clit that as big as a small penis and the hotel overbooked and they have to share a bed. Give me a break!!!!!!!!!! Sorry !!! Thanks for writing.

Brings back memories of my losing my virginity with an older woman. She taught me well and I still remember her fondly nearly fifty years later. I think that there are far more younger men who are taught how to love a woman by an older woman than most would believe. In any case I enjoyed your story, and yes I would like to read more about you and your first lover. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Thank you for the feedback. It's my first effort.

I wont please everyone and don't aim to.

I never have commented on others stories as I didn't feel I should unless I too have contributed; therefore the negative comment I shall ignore as I declare them to have no real voice.

but thanks. Five Stars!