All Comments on 'Mary Weaver - The Bookseller Pt. 03.2'

Im enjoying this series , and this rewrite has earned an extra star.

The slow build is good , and now Cabot and Weaver have reached the bedroom and the fun can begin.. I think you are teasing the reader with how it ended. Its ok though i love a good tease.

I must confess that at first I thought that this part 3.2 was a duplicate of part 3 - a small lead-in explaining the partial repetition would've been nice, like did the first part happen at all? was it all in Weaver's mind? or did they agree to start their encounter over?