by MaryAnn678
I bypassed this story on my first run thru the new stories for today, as the title wasn't to my usual taste. Glad I took a second glance.
Well crafted story and lo `n behold the author has some more. Some personal touches that I found touching me personally, so I might be biased but... I like it.
Thanks to "MaryAnn" for her offering of this tale and my delight that she has others to share.
Really exciting and well-written story. Thanks! A nice way to warm up a cold winter day here in Ieland!
Don't be intimidated by morons like him. Keep up the great writing.
A truly first class story. Without the sex it would have been a great poignant story. Or the sex is as well told as any, and without the ridiculous gushing pussies or so much precum that a man has to change his trouser. Simply a good story.
This was a well written and nicely paced story. You develop your character well, and it makes the reader "hungry" to see more of her.
This was a well written and nicely paced story. You develop your character well, and it makes the reader "hungry" to see more of her.
Well written and highly erotic! Maryann678 is without question one of Literotica's best writers!
That was just incredibly, intelligently erotic - titillating and then breath-takingly sexual. I would love to be there- how I don't know but I will dream of this for years. A woman like that is scary, both in the verbal and sensual foreplay as well as in the mind-blowing act - as she complexly owns you and you wouldn't even care if you ever lived another day. WOW.