All Comments on 'Mary's Evolution: Book 01'

This is one hot story. I'm already looking forward to more.

The description of Mary is so vivid that I can picture her perfectly in my mind, and needless to say that I find this type of woman incredibly erotic as well. Continue please.

Your writing is vivid and gave me the perfect picture of Mary. I love women like this, they are too rare. Please continue this story. Backwoodsman

That was a great story about Mary and her evolution into having sex. I like how you described her sex with Greg and how he had tO get her to understand that she was sexy to him and that not all men liked skinny women with no hair on their bodies. Please continue this story with her coming down to the den after her date that night. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. That was one hot chapter and I came real good.

i really loved this story.do u knw i m just lyk mary.21 bt single.plump nd heavy. ur story gave me a lot of confidence that i can b sexy too. thanks

It is amazing! I know a Mary who could almost be a spitting image of the one in the story. Except for the Mary I know having only DD breasts, she could be at least the sister of the Mary in the story. And The Mary I know has just turned 18!!!!!!!!