All Comments on 'Mary's Virginity Ch. 01'

That was a nice story about DAX taking Mary's Virginity for the first time. It was also nice to see how she liked pain and how she resembled her mother in that way according to what was written. I would love to see another chapter on how he trains her in SM.

I think Daddy should train Mary by demanding good grades from her. For every bad grade she must be celibate for a week, for every good grades she gets to cum as many times as possible for one night; but the punishment comes before the rewards.

That's the way, get her when she's barely legal, still a virgin, and supposedly has never had an orgasm before? And she'll just fall at your feet, try to obey your every ridiculous command, and welcome your beatings when she fails, as you set her up to do in the first place. This sounds like such a middle-aged male wannabe fantasy, even though it was written by a woman.

what a very happy ver hot horny story reading this was awesome .

getting my big cock so hard and horny loved the story and the brilliant writing