All Comments on 'Maryse Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Perfect her English?

Nobody from Canada would come to the United States to "perfect her English".

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Not Enough

Wow... This story had promise, and I feel cheated You could have started out with how you met yor Italian angel, went into that relationship more.. and then you could have made this alot more romantic.

slimbutcurvyslimbutcurvyalmost 17 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the comments!

Thanks for the comments!

To the 1st commenter... sorry, it's just my first story! I've already submitted part 2, which gives a bit more background... hope you like it :)

To the 2nd commenter... she's from Quebec, and speaks French natively. There are plenty of Quebeckers coming to the States to learn English, many in colleges and many as au pairs...

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