All Comments on 'Mason's Chance'

Great imagery. Good plot and character development. Wonderful tenderness and emotion. Just be prepared for your fans begging for a sequel.

Just what i needed, some sugar, that kid was adorable. Mason finally got the family he deserved.

You are so full of beautiful adjectives. Every scene is beautifully described. I love your writing and now I can hardly wait for chapter 7 of 'PAC'. You are the best!!

Cliff

How tom became rob in one of the sentences. Threw me off for a minute trying to figure out who rob was.

Nice story, but, it felt rushed, there was really no history for Tom apart from his wife having leukemia. For that 3*

Utterly lovely. You touched this lonely person deeply. I have felt that same sense of desire, overwhelming passion and deep love. You helped me revisit thoughts and feelings I still long for. I loved it. Thank you.

Really really good. A bit slow at the start, but over all very nice. leaves us all with that someday it could happen to us.

I loved the story, it taped every emotion I have. I hope you keep writing you are too talented to give up writing stories like these.

A gorgeous and endearing love story. Loved it

I enjoyed the slow building smoldering pace of your story that never got ahead of itself...Thanks!

Once again, your writing shares a sublime story, filled with anticipation and building with arousal, driving forward with passion and the hope of something truly excellent! As the story unfolded I was again filled with tears of great joy and wonder! I applaud your amazing ability to so passionately share a love that is tender, reL and fulfilling, not just sex. Your work is amazing! I could have reAd a whole year of their growing relationship. Just like with Rob and Bobbie's story, Tom, mason and little James were delightful!

I still don't know why Mason wouldn't question how Tom chose to be with him after having a wife. I would have been interested in whether he had been bi . I waited for Mason to ask about it. I loved James and it was a sweet story.

Finally....a story that is filled with love, raw emotions, and something beside just sex. It takes the experience to a new level.....Keep telling it like it is. Thanks again,

Hot too. I liked the slow pace of the story, but also that they could recognize attraction and love and didn't hesitate to act on it. A benefit of being grown up and mature rather than college kids.

But does James have to be such a brat? Way over the top comments from a child who doesn't sound to be over 8 years old. His ill mannered behavior almost ruined the engagement moment. They need to take that child to task, else Masons' happily ever after will be short lived. Problem childs nasty outbursts mar an otherwise sweet love story.

I would like to have seen at least one more interaction with Miss Peggy...to get her approval of Tom. I also wondered about why Mason didn't question Tom about having a wife and suddenly being attracted to him. Maybe good questions to answer in the sequel...hmmm???

Tom seems evolved enough to recognize how fortunate he is to have been given a second chance at love. He is attracted to Mason both inside and out. Perhaps he is bi, or maybe Mason is the first man he has been attracted to, regardless the heart wants what it wants. Good for Tom that he went ahead and gave Mason a chance. And kudos to Mason a sweet soul who desperately needed to be loved, and would never question how that love came to be.

The love was portrayed as wonderfully as the intimate scenes, and I can't help loving every moment of this story.

Thanks for posting it.~

Loved the Christmas love story, and loved the hairy chest Tom sported!

This was amazing!!! So freaking great! Please make more, just add more to it and yes the huge question, did Tom just become attracted to mason or was he slightly bi? Great story

What a great story. I loved the sentimentality of the story and the love a first sight implication. It actually made me cry. Thanks for showing that everyone has the possibility to find love.

James is such an adorable kid and this story is so sweet!

With the life events that has happen in life over the last 15 years of lose, assaults and the heartbreaks it is wonderful to read a story like this. The story has made me smile and feel the love of two people. I do miss that kind of love...

These are manly tears.

I would love to read about them having a true "wedding", and reading about a more mature version of James. Cute kid for the most part, but his bratty outburst almost ruined the proposal. Perhaps Mason and Tommy can adopt another child saving James from being an only child ie:a spoiled brat. James not withstanding it is a beautiful love story, hope you write more.

I would love to be Mason.Sitting there making out with another man.Then when he sees Tom's cock for the first time.He can't help him self and just loves how big and fat his cock is .And he knows that he's going to be able to feel it.Then he starts stroking Tom's cock he loves how it feels in his hands He feels hoe big and long it is.So when he started getting real horny.He had to put Tom's big cock in his mouth and start sucking on it nice and slow.So he can taste how good it is.Then he started sucking his cock harder and faster than Tom started shooting loads of cum in his mouth.Then he Swallowed it..And loved how good it was.Then Tom started licking his ass real good sticking his tougne ad far as it could go in Masons ass .Then he got to feel Tom's big cock sliding into his ass and it felt good. Then Tom pushed the rest of his 9 inch cock in his ass and started getting fuckef real good.Then when he filled his ass up with all his cum.Mason was in love. IT WOULD BE GREAT TO MASON .IF I WAS HIM I WOULD SUCK TOM'S 9 inch cock atleast 4 times a day.My.lover is black and I'm white. I used to suck white guys off all the time.Then when I joined the marines and seen all those black cocks in the showers.I knew exactly what I wanted then.I went to the bar with one of the black guys.And me and him got a little wasted. We were both walking to the barracks and I said you ever had a guy suck your cock.He said no.I go you want to see how it feels.He looked at me and said you really want to suck my cock.I said ya.He said we can't let anyone know what we did..I said I know.We went down by the bleachers and I told him to drop his pants.He did and that was the first time I ever seen a black cock in front of my face.I looked at him and said that your cock is fuckin beautiful..I started stroking him and he felt so good .His cock was 9 inches long and. Real fat.Plus it was real black.I got so horny I put it in my mouth and sucked it real slow and it tasted great.Then I started sucking his cock faster.and after a while he said he was going to cum so I grab his ass so he couldn't move .Then he started cumming in my mouth and I never had a guy cum so much.I kept swallowing his cum until he was empty and I got up and said did you like it. He said that you can suck me off any time you want.I said you have a beautiful cock Your the first black guy I ever sucked..I said to him I'm sucking black guys off from now on.And that was when I was seventeen years old and now I'm fifty years old and still sucking off those beautiful black cocks.

Awesome story telling and so descriptive painting the whole picture and not taking forever to get there. Just the right amount of everything. You have a true talent and just wish I could write like this. I have a story pending but not sure if it will get posted. I tried getting an editor but nobody replied but one and never heard back from them. If there is an editor out there that wants to help me out let me know please. Thanks again for such a great story!

I loved the story. At first I was concerned Tom was just using Mason, but then realized that there were mutual feelings. I liked the ending.

Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. I always loved reading something romantic and with such a happy ending. It brings hope to my world and we all need some of that.

This is awsome,and it managed to make my day less crappy.

Keep up the goo d work !

I think I read this story when it first came out, and I loved it then. Then I was remembering it, and I wanted to read it again but could never find it. I did searches and even went to other sites. It totally eluded me until today when it popped up on the random story list. When I opened it and started reading, I about fell out of my chair. This story is so heartwarming. I feel like I've found an old friend.

Anther wonderful Christmas story for you to enjoy.

It's really nice reading this, because even though this is just a story i somehow wanted to have a life like they have. I wish i was just a character written to have this story rather than living this life without the only thing i needed. Thank you for giving us comforts by your stories.

I really enjoyed this. Favorite points.

1. Moved along well.

2. Wasn't overly long, I don't like reading for ages from a screen.

3. Thomas's character. It was more real because it wasn't, I'm macho straight trying something new. It was a more real, hey yeah I loved a woman before, but now I love you. So preconceived limitations set by sexuality weren't a factor. Making the relationship progression more natural.

Well done.

Loved this story of happiness found after sad loss.

Very nice!

Beautiful love story!

This is so heartwarming.

This story resonated with me on several levels. I read it before on the UDATZ website but somehow reading it here, it was new again! The author is very good at making the reader feel involved with and empathetic to the characters. BEAUTIFUL!

Yay! I loved it and them, thanks!

I first read this story when it showed up in 'similar stories'. Not remembering the title, I discovered it again today as I finished consuming all of the writings of VaRiverWriter.

If you've arrived here as I did at first, randomly, do yourself a favor and make time to read all of VRW's entries. Such talent and so much heart in all of them! Oh, and lots of sexy stuff...

Loved it , awesome story thank you 😊

Heartwarming story.

I just wonder... James seems to be a a bit young to make comments like "can you take that elsewhere", doesn't he?

What a superb romance - just the thing to bring a tear to the eye and a smile to the face on a cold winter's evening.

Thank you VaRiverWriter for creating and sharing this story.

I’ve read this story many times, especially on Christmas Eve. It’s just wonderful. Thank you for creating it.