All Comments on 'Mass Effect - A Hero Rises Ch. 01'

This feels like a prelude to the Mass effect series that I love

Waiting for more!!!!!

Great story eager to read the next one. He's just a soldier right?

Great plot and This better be a harem story lel

As a Mass Effect tragic from way back, I really liked this. I also think your writing has great potential. Keep up the good work. I had actually started penning my own Mass Effect story for this site, but now that I'm reading yours I feel less inclined to publish it, as I can see you already have things in hand. I look forward to reading more. - Anti.

I am kind of wondering about his non-military education. It doesn't sound like he had any schooling. Since you did not address this, I am just assuming they jacked him into a computer at some point, and downloaded a program that gave him a basic High school education, plus some college.

Annie - FemShep